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Maverick4

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Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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shayneii

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Posted November 15, '09 7:28pm UTC

I better enter then, lol.

Crunchy leaves, tumbling,
Squirrels scrambling, chilling cold,
Trees shivering, bare.

To clarify... tumbling = 2 syl., scrambling = 2 syl., shivering = 3 syl.

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choazmachine

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Nomad

Posted November 20, '09 2:03am UTC

Judging, soon?

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notataco

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Nomad

Posted November 20, '09 2:20am UTC

I love good turkey,
Baby it is good to me,
Now lets watch it bake.

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shayneii

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Peasant

Posted November 20, '09 4:43am UTC

I think the deadline is up notataco... and I'm not sure if that fits the theme :P

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notataco

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Nomad

Posted November 20, '09 11:44pm UTC

aww man! i nailed the theme perfectly lol

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jaza_m

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Nomad

Posted November 21, '09 2:51am UTC

Trees Changing color,
Red, orange, brown and yellow.
To Autumn, hello.

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jaza_m

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Nomad

Posted November 21, '09 2:52am UTC

Oh just relized deadlines up xD.

Nevermind that Haiku.

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shayneii

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Posted November 21, '09 4:12pm UTC

Well dudeguy hasn't judged yet... so I don't think it should matter. Unless he's already started judging.

I dunno.

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shayneii

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Posted November 21, '09 10:56pm UTC

Well guess what. I'm judging this week yay?

Anyways...

Champion's Exhibit... hypoxia

The Sights of Autumn
Epiphany of Colour
An Earthly Spectrum

This could've won this week's theme. Too bad you had to win last week, lol.

The wood award (5th place) goes to... jaza_m

Trees Changing color,
Red, orange, brown and yellow.
To Autumn, hello.

Rather simple. Try and describe how you feel about autumn, or more description. At least you got mentioned :P

The iron award (4th place) goes to... TerryLasVegas

Warm autumn sunsets
Prettier than day itself
Sweet and beautiful

Pretty good, descriptive haiku. Try again next week.

The bronze award (3rd place) goes to... Ernie15

Cold, breezy autumn
Leaves rustling, cool winds blowing
Life is just too good

You really had me with the first 2 lines. The final line killed it though Try a different conclusion next time.

The silver award (2nd place) goes to... jdoggparty

Left and Right through pathes
Finish detector beeping
SPLODE!!! Finished the maze

I lol'd. 'Nuff said.

The gold award (1st place) goes to... Bronze

The sun moves backwards
Letting the trees take a break
The pines choose not to?

Congrats, now go get your merit from someone! (Carlie?) Oh, and pick the next theme please

Armpit

Words cannot express
My endless love and glory
For an Autumn day

It's alright. Doesn't really describe an autumn day though. For example, I could replace the last line with "For an egg salad".

The LOL award goes to... Owen135731

The leave pile slants up.
As I jump, my feet tingle.
****. It's an ant hill.

As usual... :P I lol'd.

The Writer's Block award goes to... yielee

An Ode to Autumn:
This is my Autumn Haiku.
How did you like it?

Hey... you said it yourself... :P

The LOLWUT? award goes to... choazmachine

Apples are growing
Trees seem to be on fire
The cold wind breezes

Trees on fire in a cold wind? xD

The "I am displeased" award goes to FloydTC

the leaves are orange
the air is too cold and dry
how can I like it?

I know... we're all waiting for summer xD

The "I judged" award goes to shayneii

Crunchy leaves, tumbling,
Squirrels scrambling, chilling cold,
Trees shivering, bare.

Yes, I felt the need to do this.

The Hunger award goes to... notataco

I love good turkey,
Baby it is good to me,
Now lets watch it bake.

Heck... even your name is making me hungry...
PS: (http://apostrophe.me)... I feel the grammar nazi coming out in me.

The "Agh... so close" award goes to... dudeguy

Walking down the lane
I see a leaf pile, jump!
Ouch! A fan on curb!

Your middle line is 6 syllables! Noo!

Well... that took a while. I'm still unclear on who the judge is for the next theme. Either me, or dudeguy. Or if a miracle happens mav will come back to judge. As for the deadline... TBD, sometime in the next 1-2 weeks.

Congrats Bronze, go get your merit, and please pick the theme before Monday. Otherwise I (or Dudeguy) will. :P

Well guess what.  I'm judging this week yay?\r\n\r\nAnyways...\r\n\r\nChampion's Exhibit... [b]hypoxia[/b]\r\n\r\nThe Sights of Autumn\r\nEpiphany of Colour\r\nAn Earthly Spectrum\r\n\r\nThis could've won this week's theme.  Too bad you had to win last week, lol.\r\n\r\nThe wood award (5th place) goes to... [b]jaza_m[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Trees Changing color,\r\nRed, orange, brown and yellow.\r\nTo Autumn, hello.[/quote]\r\n\r\nRather simple.  Try and describe how you feel about autumn, or more description.  At least you got mentioned :P\r\n\r\nThe iron award (4th place) goes to... [b]TerryLasVegas[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Warm autumn sunsets\r\nPrettier than day itself\r\nSweet and beautiful[/quote]\r\n\r\nPretty good, descriptive haiku.  Try again next week.\r\n\r\nThe bronze award (3rd place) goes to... [b]Ernie15[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Cold, breezy autumn\r\nLeaves rustling, cool winds blowing\r\nLife is just too good[/quote]\r\n\r\nYou really had me with the first 2 lines.  The final line killed it though :(  Try a different conclusion next time.\r\n\r\nThe silver award (2nd place) goes to... [b]jdoggparty[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Left and Right through pathes\r\nFinish detector beeping\r\nSPLODE!!! Finished the maze[/quote]\r\n\r\nI lol'd.  'Nuff said.\r\n\r\nThe gold award (1st place) goes to... [b]Bronze[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]The sun moves backwards\r\nLetting the trees take a break\r\nThe pines choose not to?[/quote]\r\n\r\nCongrats, now go get your merit from someone! (Carlie?)  Oh, and pick the next theme please :)\r\n\r\n[b]Armpit[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Words cannot express\r\nMy endless love and glory\r\nFor an Autumn day[/quote]\r\n\r\nIt's alright.  Doesn't really describe an autumn day though.  For example, I could replace the last line with "For an egg salad".\r\n\r\nThe LOL award goes to... [b]Owen135731[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]The leave pile slants up.\r\nAs I jump, my feet tingle.\r\n****. It's an ant hill.[/quote]\r\n\r\nAs usual... :P I lol'd.\r\n\r\nThe Writer's Block award goes to... [b]yielee[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]An Ode to Autumn:\r\nThis is my Autumn Haiku.\r\nHow did you like it?[/quote]\r\n\r\nHey... you said it yourself... :P\r\n\r\nThe LOLWUT? award goes to... [b]choazmachine[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Apples are growing\r\nTrees seem to be on fire\r\nThe cold wind breezes[/quote]\r\n\r\nTrees on fire in a cold wind? xD\r\n\r\nThe "I am displeased" award goes to [b]FloydTC[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]the leaves are orange\r\nthe air is too cold and dry\r\nhow can I like it?[/quote]\r\n\r\nI know... we're all waiting for summer xD\r\n\r\nThe "I judged" award goes to [b]shayneii[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Crunchy leaves, tumbling,\r\nSquirrels scrambling, chilling cold,\r\nTrees shivering, bare.[/quote]\r\n\r\nYes, I felt the need to do this.\r\n\r\nThe Hunger award goes to... [b]notataco[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]I love good turkey,\r\nBaby it is good to me,\r\nNow lets watch it bake.[/quote]\r\n\r\nHeck... even your name is making me hungry...\r\nPS: [url=http://apostrophe.me](http://apostrophe.me)[/url]... I feel the grammar nazi coming out in me.\r\n\r\nThe "Agh... so close" award goes to... [b]dudeguy[/b]\r\n\r\n[quote]Walking down the lane\r\nI see a leaf pile, jump!\r\nOuch! A fan on curb![/quote]\r\n\r\nYour middle line is 6 syllables!  Noo!\r\n\r\nWell... that took a while.  I'm still unclear on who the judge is for the next theme.  Either me, or dudeguy.  Or if a miracle happens mav will come back to judge.  As for the deadline... TBD, sometime in the next 1-2 weeks.\r\n\r\nCongrats Bronze, go get your merit, and please pick the theme before Monday.  Otherwise I (or Dudeguy) will. :P

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marioman327

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Posted November 21, '09 11:06pm UTC

Leaves fall to the ground
Signaling new beginnings
My heart is renewed

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marioman327

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Nomad

Posted November 21, '09 11:09pm UTC

Dang, it's over? when does new one start?

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shayneii

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Peasant

Posted November 21, '09 11:10pm UTC

Sorry... judging is already over for this theme. Wait for the next theme, and you can enter

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jaza_m

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Nomad

Posted November 22, '09 9:14am UTC

Woots! I learnt what a haiku is when doing this, and i came 5th!

Ftw =D

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shayneii

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Peasant

Posted November 22, '09 4:18pm UTC

@MarioMan: You ninja'd me -.- lol

The next theme should start today, Monday, or Tuesday, depending on if/when Bronze picks the next theme.

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Bronze

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Posted November 22, '09 5:48pm UTC

Oh I won?!

Wow, that almost slipped by me, cause I spend about 5 minutes on AG a day now...

Uhhhh theme theme theme....running out of nature themes...

The new theme is Bear! (as in the species of animals)

(hasty example)

The old shaggy man
Ferocious and strong, yet wise
Respect him, or else...

Have fun!!!!!!!!!!

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