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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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phycticpotato
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Nomad

Unfathomable depths
Innumerable waves crash
Boisterous ocean

As you can tell, I have not done Haiku in a very long time.

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

I think the first line has six syllables phyctic.....

phycticpotato
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Nomad

I was afriad of that. I thought it was un-fa-thom-able, not un-fa-thom-a-ble. Sorry. XP

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

You can still submit another one no sweat.

daleks
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Chamberlain

The calm serene sea
Slowly becomes more displeased
Now a violent storm

HahiHa
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HahiHa
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Regent

Mother Sea unleashed,
Endless ocean of violence,
Her deafening wrath.

...it's not quite what I hoped it would sound like. Please tell me honestly, does it catch the feeling of a raging sea, or is it just a bunch of strong words mixed together?

HahiHa
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Regent

Forget it, I think I have a better one..

The following entry is the one I want judged:

Deep Mother raging,
High Father's fury unleashed,
My ship lies shattered.

goumas13
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Grand Duke

I haven't written a haiku in a really long time. Anyways:
Untamed warm ocean
Washing down the surly coast
Cleaning the foul beach

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Here's mine

The Beast in the Ocean

The waves, they unfurl
their angry fingers snap shut
they roar like a beast

Schmiddy1234
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Nomad

Here's mine:

The Watery Demon

Releasing anger
killing innocent ship men
having no limits.

Krizaz
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Nomad

Must we see the seas?
With crash of waves, yet again?
The sound is beauty.

killersup10
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Blacksmith

so very salty
this sea be with mighty waves
to the murky death

kevin8ye
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Nomad

[/b]The storm[b]

Clouds form in the sky
Lightning forms and strikes the earth
all that's left is ash

kevin8ye
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Nomad

oopss, i didnt read the theme, this is a new one :
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Clouds form in the sky
Ligtning forms and strikes the pond
Black smoke fills the air

acmed
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Nomad

Must have poems in by today. Judging should be done by the latest of Sunday.

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