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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted June 18, '12 1:22am UTC

The round is over? Bite me.

Miami cannibal style? Sure!

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted June 18, '12 2:48am UTC

WELCOME TO THE HAIKU JUNGLE. WE HAVE FUN AND.... Mav...

Okay, so this is the judging, one day after the due date! NEW RECORD!

Hit me up on my page if you didn't place.

And...

Trains.

BEGIN!

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5th Place: murasaki9

A silent cry for help
whispered loudly in the dark
is heard, titanic

I like the oxymoron in there. Really emotioned it out. Is that a word? ........ Keep it up!

4th Place: Darktroop07

I am lost in time.
I can't find any help here.
Will I get back home?

Will you? I don't know. I like the intensity set in, making me feel what you're feeling... pain. Nice

3rd Place: Luthix

Desolate, dreary,
Despondent of desire,
Discordant of death.

Not sure if the D's are intentional or not, but I like the format of it. Clever job! Welcome to the contest!

2nd Place: Bladerunner679

the shambling of souls
lost forever in the void
save them from their fate.

I thought it was beautiful. Captured the theme perfectly and made me want to EAT SAD SALAD......... what? Uh.... Good job....

1st Place: Ernie15

A memo of stones.
Is it visible from space?
Or is this my doom?

I loved the image you showed in this man. Great use of rhythm and a great haiku! Go to a mod.... NOW.

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Okay, congrats to everyone.

Next theme: Flaming Water.

Due: June 29th.

K.

WELCOME TO THE HAIKU JUNGLE. WE HAVE FUN AND.... Mav...\r\n\r\nOkay, so this is the judging, one day after the due date! NEW RECORD!\r\n\r\nHit me up on my page if you didn't place.\r\n\r\nAnd...\r\n\r\nTrains.\r\n\r\nBEGIN!\r\n\r\n_____________________________________________________________________\r\n\r\n[b]5th Place: murasaki9[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]A silent cry for help\r\nwhispered loudly in the dark\r\nis heard, titanic[/i]\r\n\r\nI like the oxymoron in there. Really emotioned it out. Is that a word? ........ Keep it up!\r\n\r\n[b]4th Place: Darktroop07[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]I am lost in time.\r\nI can't find any help here.\r\nWill I get back home?[/i]\r\n\r\nWill you? I don't know. I like the intensity set in, making me feel what you're feeling... pain. Nice\r\n\r\n[b]3rd Place: Luthix[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Desolate, dreary,\r\nDespondent of desire,\r\nDiscordant of death. [/i]\r\n\r\nNot sure if the D's are intentional or not, but I like the format of it. Clever job! Welcome to the contest!\r\n\r\n[b]2nd Place: Bladerunner679[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]the shambling of souls\r\nlost forever in the void\r\nsave them from their fate. [/i]\r\n\r\nI thought it was beautiful. Captured the theme perfectly and made me want to EAT SAD SALAD......... what? Uh.... Good job....\r\n\r\n[b]1st Place: Ernie15[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]A memo of stones.\r\nIs it visible from space?\r\nOr is this my doom?[/i]\r\n\r\nI loved the image you showed in this man. Great use of rhythm and a great haiku! Go to a mod.... NOW.\r\n\r\n____________________________________________________________________\r\n\r\nOkay, congrats to everyone.\r\n\r\nNext theme: [b]Flaming Water. [/b]\r\n\r\nDue: [b]June 29th.[/b]\r\n\r\nK.

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Salvidian

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Farmer

Posted June 18, '12 3:15am UTC

Here's the first attempt at this.

I found water here
I found my throat burnt and charred
I found pollution

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murasaki9

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Blacksmith

Posted June 18, '12 2:11pm UTC

I placed? Wow...so impressed...

Flaming water? Huh?

Raise your sword higher
strike the boiling sea, it flames
it will engulf you

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daleks

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Chamberlain

Posted June 18, '12 3:53pm UTC

Hit me up on my page if you didn't place.

I didn't place...O wait. I didn't make one.

Trains.

When I get that song stuck in my head I replace it with this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BTHeZyOL0aw

OK. Haiku time:

My fire burns everywhere
It burns all, water is not safe
No one cannot control it

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CheapCheep

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Nomad

Posted June 18, '12 6:08pm UTC

How?

The water flaming
Red and orange reflects off blue
How did it happen?

There's my haiku.

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Bladerunner679

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Blacksmith

Posted June 18, '12 9:26pm UTC

lake fjalding burning
bloodmoon prophecy begun
time to fight aeslip

(only people who know the elder scrolls will get this one)

-Blade

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted June 19, '12 7:07am UTC

Frigid Russian lands,
Distilled a burning passion,
Of Aqua Vitae.

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killersup10

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Blacksmith

Posted June 19, '12 1:39pm UTC

hatefull inferno
burning inside sanity
embers smolder hope

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted June 19, '12 2:31pm UTC

Aqua Vitae is Latin for Water of Life. One of the nicknames of Vodka.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted June 20, '12 1:30am UTC

One of the nicknames of Vodka.

Might as well won right there. New Theme: Vodka.

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Jazmoon

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Peasant

Posted June 20, '12 10:25pm UTC

Reborn

Flame tempts, course with fire
the bottle laughs, gurgling with glee
Morning, i'm reborn.

Hope you like it, gave it my best shot n.n

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EmperorPalpatine

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Jester

Posted June 21, '12 4:58am UTC

the bottle laughs, gurgling with glee

(1)the (2)bot(3)tle (4)laughs, (5)gurg(6)ling (7)with (8)glee

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Jazmoon

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Peasant

Posted June 21, '12 8:26am UTC

Reborn

Flame tempts, course with fire
bottle laughs, gurgling with glee
Morning, i'm reborn

There we go ;P must have missed that

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Gantic

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King

Posted June 22, '12 11:50pm UTC

Hi guys,

This is an important announcement regarding the future of this contest. After deliberation on the status of the Haiku Contest, we will no longer be giving any merits to the Haiku Contest for the foreseeable future. The judging has been lackluster or nonexistent. It fails to adequately highlight why the winner was chosen over all other entries. The judge has also consistently shown to be unable to handle the position in a professional manner. This is why we have decided to no longer honor any merits won in the Haiku Contest. We ask that you find a new judge that can behave in a professional and thorough manner. Simply, we ask for merit-quality judging for merit-quality winners. If the judge proves to be capable, we may consider restoring the prize.

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