ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Cold as cold can be
My tongue stuck to the North Pole
Oh, crap! Come off tongue!

the_manta
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aw, ag never changes, 2 weeks after the due date and still no new theme.

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Well, the title just didn't change. It has actually only been...umm... 3 days.

chitown
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Farmer

Ernie said he would have the oxygen theme judged by Saturday or Sunday. Well it is Tuesday.

jacksonghuntington
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Nomad

Yesterday was thursday... fun fun fun... heh.

Any day now.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

Be patient, my friend,
don't throw yourself, recklessly,
in the depths of sin.

Ernie15
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Ernie said he would have the oxygen theme judged by Saturday or Sunday. Well it is Tuesday.


Nag, nag, nag...

I'll do the judging right now, but it won't be an elaborate one that everybody likes because I just don't feel like judging every single entry. Just the top 5 will be posted.
dudeguy45
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Noöøôoooo Ernie. Don't be lazy. I've come to expect your quality judging.

Ernie15
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Sorry for the very late judging. I haven't had much energy for the past week or so, so I've been putting off judging for a while. Hopefully the next time I judge I won't be so exhausted; at least, not without a good reason.

Since I will be offline for the next few days, I thought it best to do the judging now instead of wait until Monday.

I assure you I've read every entry, and there were three in particular that popped out at me. My mind is so exhausted that I can't express my critiquing in words, and I don't quite even know how to finish this sentence, but....here are the awards:

3rd Place - Dudeguy45

Draw your final breath
Don't take your air for granted
your lungs thank you


2nd Place - FallenSky

Fading for so long
Inert in the sterile bed
How I'd like to die


1st Place - Maverick4

On top of the world,
Light-headed euphoria.
Crystal are the skies.


This was a hard choice, but out of the three that jumped out at me, Maverick's jumped the highest; so to speak. Congratulations Maverick, go inhale your merit!

The next theme is The Old West and the deadline is June 17.

Happy Haiku'ing!

I'm going to bed now.

master565
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The sand, it goes on.
Only broken by a town.
Where the fight begins.

HahiHa
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Kewl, we wait so long and don't even get our haiku judged. Well I understand, I'm sorry that you are so exhausted, hope it gets better. And I do think it's a good idea you put off judging for a while.

chitown
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Farmer

The sun is setting
Cowboys get on their horses
Gallop in the night

iamnotironman
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Nomad

The Sun beats down on
A hot desert, Cowboys on
Their horses to fight

bunniecorps
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Golden rays shower
Blood soakes the gunpowder
Cowboys just glower

master565
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I just want to say, can i haz a title name change plz? This title was from 2 contests ago. Can one of the judges just give a moderator a comment?

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