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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Yodadude53
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I can't think of a good one! Ahhhhh! D:

EnterOrion
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I can't think of a good one! Ahhhhh! D:


If you mean for this week we have found your weakness. You are entering too quick, and not really giving yourself time to think about it.

If I were you, I would give a few days.
Yodadude53
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Hey... maybe that's why I suck so bad! Thanks!

pHacon
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If I were you, I would give a few days.


Whenever I give anything a few days it doesn't get done :P

I think this one is a little overly pessimistic.

With technology
What glory can we create?
Our own destruction?
chitown
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Fried wired right there
People glued to computers
Overload BOOM BOOM

I don't even know what that is, but I guess it is technology.

Yodadude53
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With technology
What glory can we create?
Our own destruction?

Like Ernie said about mine, you could replace technology with another three syllable word and it would be about the same.
pHacon
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with another three syllable word and it would be about the same.


Technology has 4, so if I did that, it wouldn't be a haiku. O_o
And yeah, I guess you're right about that, but I suppose there's no helping it now.
Ernie15
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And yeah, I guess you're right about that, but I suppose there's no helping it now.


You know you can change your entry, right?
pHacon
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You know you can change your entry, right?

I'm lazy man... and my creative juices went into writing an essay today, so, later in the week, I suppose.
Ernie15
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Bard

Okay, suit yourself. I don't have to heckle you because I'm not the judge this round.

Ernie15
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The judging for the "light" round has already taken place. It's actually pretty hard to miss. :P

MrAutomatic
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The rhyme award. Go figure.

Update that gadget
My experiment still fails
Future benefits

TerryLasVegas
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Weve come a long way
From the age of the caveman
to the age of space

Ernie15
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Mad science got wrong
Robots will rule the planet
This is all my fault

Armpit
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Haha wow I actually won this. I guess I can go claim my prize now.

Before I do that, though, I'll give you something to keep you occupied.

Halt. System error.
Dysfunctional malfunction.
This does not compute.

If there was more room, I would have put in explosion sound effects.

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