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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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killersup10
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Blacksmith

unforgiven death
stealing dealthy souls tonight
forever frozen


Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?

pangtongshu
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Jester

Existence beloved
Fearful for the absolute
A darkness of peace

nichodemus
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nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Pulling Out

Massive death payloads,
Shatters our innocent lives,
Watch them flee far now.

From the eyes of an Afghani civilian. Glad to see the soldiers go. I expect the judge to know why Reaper is relevant....

waluigi
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Shepherd

And now for something... completely different.

A melodic riff;
sound of the azure mollusk,
cowbell fills the air.


I'm sorry, I had to with that title. When else could I enter something like this?

Maverick4
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Peasant

Your innocence shall
Serve as a shield. Here's a rag;
Wipe your bloodied hands.

TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Embrace his pale hands;
The cold is better than
The alternative.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?

Yep.

I expect the judge to know why Reaper is relevant....

Nice.

Your innocence shall
Serve as a shield.

I'm a fan of consonance, but this is a heluva tongue twister.

The cold is better than

6 syllables.
skydragon720
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Nomad

The Reaper

unescapable,
silently following us,
we can run, cant hide.

Does this follow the 5-7-5 pattern?

yes, it does.

Maverick4
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Peasant

I'm a fan of consonance, but this is a heluva tongue twister.


Is that a bad thing?
TackyCrazyTNT
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Peasant

Failure.

*Embrace his pale hands;
His cold breath is better than
The alternative.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Is that a bad thing?

I'm fine with it, but I'm not sure how acmed will respond.

His cold breath is better than

Wouldn't "cold touch" make more sense here?
Salvidian
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Farmer

Los compañeros agrícolas del segador eterno

Give him your burdens
He's an eternal soul mate
He does our work

Google translate doesn't do a justice. The title translates to "The farming companions of the eternal reaper." Google translate butchers that soooo much.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

He does our work

4 syllables.
Jacen96
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Bard

after looking at the them i decided to give it a shot.

Friendship with the reaper
The reaper comes soon
and he wants to be your friend
for deaths are mishaps

are we allowed multiple entries?

~~~Darth Caedus

Salvidian
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Farmer

4 syllables.


Our is 2 syllables. Or at least that's the way I pronounce it. Ow-er.
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