ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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francisjannponce
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magic is a bluff
magic is really stupid
believe it or not

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

Magic is bluff

Francis,why is your first line like that?

Magic is really stupid

If you want to make an entry make it with no insults.

You know Francis that you cannot win on this round.

pangtongshu
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Jester

If you want to make an entry make it with no insults.


It is just his viewpoints on magic. He dislikes magic..and finds it stupid. A poem is subjective to the author
Arceus12
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Shepherd

Today magician,
Later boring old person,
Magic never lasts.

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

If you want to make an entry make it with no insults.


A bit blunt, but not really harsh or anything. I'll accept it provided there's no grammar errors.

You know Francis that you cannot win on this round.


Who knows? I can't read the future unless people post!
xxBoogeymaNxx
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Nomad

Magical being
Turned into an adult
Now has no powers

xxBoogeymaNxx
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Nomad

Sorry for the DP, I changed part of my second line and forgot to compensate the syllable difference. it was supposed to be like:

Magical being
Transformed into an adult
Now has no powers

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

You know Francis that you cannot win on this round.


And you decided that? Cool attitude.
sourwhatup2
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Jester

Magic can't be seen
It is merely envisaged
Young ones can feel it

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

Here is my second version:

Black and white what's next?
Even though I'm just a stick,
I could be a trick.

sourwhatup2
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Jester

Black and white what's next?
Even though I'm just a stick,
I could be a trick.


Plagiarism at it's finest.
Check it. It's called ''The Tricking Wand''

Sigh..
Lee_Blade
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Peasant

What?
I did not know.
My friend told me that I can win with that haiku.
I did not know he copied it.
I am so sorry.Please forgive me.

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

My other other version:

Black suit and a hat
Pulls out rabbits on his hat
And a magic wand

sourwhatup2
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Jester

Either way it wasn't yours to write. He told you it, so technically, at that moment it would of been ''his''. Therefore it's still plagiarism.. Also, stop posting other Haiku's, I'm pretty sure that that last one you actually posted is going to be the only one taken into account.

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

This is my other other other other version:

You're sleepy and tired
Now you obey my command
Now do what i say

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