ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Bronze
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Shepherd

Champions Exibit:


Shouldn't that have been for me, since I won the previous one?

This boreal is real
City of trees, sea of pines
For miles unseen
Maverick4
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Am I allowed to enter next round too?


You dont have to, but then there wouldnt be a champions exibit.
dudeguy45
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At the peaceful cove
Millions of pine trees grow
Sit down, take it in.

CRAP.

Owen135731
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Peasant

[i]Needles all around,
It is like mine zone here.
My feet are bleeding.[i]

Ernie15
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Bard

It is like mine zone here.


Sorry, but that is 6 syllables.
Owen135731
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Sorry, but that is 6 syllables.


I failed at write down the sentence

Redo:


Needles all around,
It is like a mine zone here.
My feet are bleeding.
Ernie15
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Bard

The trees up above
Mock me as I sit seaward
The branches in vain

hypoxia
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Nomad

Silver plaque for me! how does the 'laque' system work?

A Single Sweet Scent
Pine - Crushed Beneath my Feet
Great Thoughts Spring to Mind

Ernie15
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Bard

how does the 'laque' system work?


1st place - Platinum
2nd place - Gold
3rd place - Silver
4th place - Wood
Yakitori
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Nomad

Washed up on the shore
A disembodied pine log
With few needles left

Maverick4
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I Sit Corrected! The Champions Exibit is wrong; It should be Bronze, not Ninja Man.

Sorry Bronze, Sorry NinjaMan.

In other news, keep the entries flowing!

And a 'sea' doesnt nessicarly mean a litteral sea.

Funakoshi signed as 'Pine Wave'...

shayneii
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Crisp breeze; autumn air
Whooshing wind, swirling needles;
Needles bathe my feet.

yielee
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Shepherd

Typhoon Mirinae
Roars Through The Philippine Sea;
Sad Devastation.

yielee
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Shepherd

Oh, that looks bad. I'm retracting that one for poor taste!

Maverick4
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Judging Wednsday! Get them entries in!

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