ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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obould
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Does anyone have any feedback on my haiku?

Google567
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I was confused by it, but poetry is confusing at times.

DrPepperRain
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Okay guys and gals, this is my Haiku

Run free in the wind
You are no longer bound to hate
Breathe in the fresh air

obould
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I like it Dr. Pepper, very moving.

DrPepperRain
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TY obould did you mske a Haiku?

DrPepperRain
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oh, sorry for the second post but i meant make not mske.

obould
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yes. i did. it's onpage 195

dudeguy45
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What happened to Ernie?!?!

member565
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I can see something
It's the light of happiness
Freedom is striking
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The light has hit me
I can hear the songs of joy
I'm finally free
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It is peaceful now
Grey has turned into colours
Freedom is living

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I tryed my best to do Haikus, I hope they are good

DrPepperRain
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obould good Haiku, interesting

member565
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Is mine any good?

Avorne
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Member - you can only choose one of them to be your Haiku.

They aren't bad though.

TuxedoPenguin
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member i like the 2nd and 3rd they paint an image in my mind.=)
ill probably write one a little later or a couple minutes

Ernie15
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What happened to Ernie?!?!


Nothing ever happened to me. I've lived my whole life without anything happening at all.
obould
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Rofl... I highly doubt that...

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