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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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dudeguy45
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+1 derp for not entering my own theme.



Thoses who cant be seen
Forever creeping,hiding
Encompassed by mist

acmed
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Woods

As the fog blinds me,
As I see the glimpse of light.
That is my way home.

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HahiHa
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Right, I forgot about punctuation. Thanks for the reminder.

A very depressing interpretation of the theme. It just reeks of worthlessness and despair. Good job actually making me feel bad, you sick person.

Isn't it depressing to be the only human left? :3
I'm glad my Haiku had such a strong emanation, that means I'm on the right track.

Oh, and thank you a lot for that new opportunity, that picture looks.. inspiring >
iMogwai
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The trees are scary
And there is some kind of mist.
Obvious enough?

1337Player
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Wood Plaque? I would prefer Stone Plaque or something like that. But meh, that's just my preference. It doesn't matter too much. I'm just happy I got placed

The twist on the theme is interesting. I'll have to think about this one for a few hours, or days.

FallenSky
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So, how's it going pals, who judged this round? I'm sorry about all that, really, but my life just sucks so badly at the moment, it's hardly conceivable. I'm not so much living as I'm surviving in fact, so I hope I didn't fluster anyone with this sudden departure.

FallenSky
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Maverick judged, so that's ok. But more to the point. Dude, I feel sorry about whatever happened. I'll be here for a while if you need someone.

Break-ups, you know, these things that kill you from the inside. I just need time I guess, but thanks buddy.

Happy Haikuing.

Quirinus1
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Maverick, when you judged the last round you mistook my poem for someone elses poem who posted above me. [check it on page 345 of this thread]

My poem was:

I will not love you.
Even if you were the last,
in this vile world.

Quirinus1
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Sorry for the double post, but I accept Mavericks cookie and forgive and forget...

master565
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The fog rolls over
The trees go on endlessly
The path home is gone

Graham
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Shrouded in self-worth;
A true glimpse above detracts
from our own decay.

Hi guise.

alexstargazer
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I look all around;
Darkness and fear surround me.
I stand here alone...

jacksonghuntington
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I laughed at that Floyd! And 2nd place? Really? Darn it! Going for gold on this one! Well, platinum that is.

Mist blocks my exits,
My forest of paradise
I won't turn back now.

Interpret it as you want, could be a strange biome, could be a pure utopia that is purly marvelous. Or am I running away from my fears? -.-

Quirinus1
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Either I fail to see it, or your picture has gone dead.

acmed
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Either I fail to see it, or your picture has gone dead


What are you talking about? The picture isn't... Hey! It's gone! >:/

Alright, after Google Imaging around, I believe I found the picture. If it's not it, I was pretty close.

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-g4vuZWMzcgg/Te06kXM7jCI/AAAAAAAACfk/oQN53V1hr1U/s1600/Fog%2BWallpapers.jpg
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