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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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marioman327

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Nomad

Posted December 5, '09 4:04pm UTC

Very nice bronze

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Bronze

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Shepherd

Posted December 5, '09 4:06pm UTC

Thanks, yours was too.

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marioman327

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Nomad

Posted December 6, '09 1:46pm UTC

So when will judging for this be?

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hypoxia

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Nomad

Posted December 6, '09 2:34pm UTC

Hope it's soon, the deadline was on Suaturday

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted December 6, '09 7:06pm UTC

Deadline will be tomorrow. I'm judging again... Muhua...MUHIAHIAHIA!

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Fall0ut

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Peasant

Posted December 6, '09 7:27pm UTC

mah mahmah

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howlett

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Nomad

Posted December 7, '09 6:28pm UTC

When is the judging?
Hurry please.

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SilentQ

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Nomad

Posted December 7, '09 6:50pm UTC

Rock spraying water,
Splashing small droplets like rain,
Creating a rainbow.

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marioman327

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Nomad

Posted December 8, '09 12:28am UTC

Wasn't judging supposed to be today? o-o

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted December 9, '09 6:58pm UTC

Ok, the judging is in!

I'm going to give everyone medals!

9th place Is a tie!

SilentQ!

Rock spraying water,
Splashing small droplets like rain,
Creating a rainbow.

D'OH! Last line is 6 sylables. But very nice description.

chaozmachine!

The woods run bountiful
The water is crisp and clear
Lair of the angels

D'OH! First line is 6 sylables. Yes, that is how I think of a ountain spring. Crisp and clear.
8th place:

7th place is off to:

Owen153751!

I swam in the spring,
I glanced ahead; Waterfall.
Death from jagged rocks.

Pristine = peace. Jagged rocks = not peace.

6th place goes too:

howlett!

Looking from mountains
Cold water hitting my face
Making me cool down

I just don't really like the last line. But yes, from experiance, it is very cold.

Wood (5th place):

marioman327!

Ataraxia
Liquid crystals shroud my woes
Drenching me in peace

I don't know what the first word means... but overall, ok haiku.

Bronze (4th place):

TSL!

Cold and running clear
It seeps through the mountain air
Only to be drank.

Seeps through mountain air? Is that one of your codes? Queers these days. Good Haiku. Just there are better.

Silver (3rd place):

hypoxia!

Of the purest blue
Glacial Water - cool to touch
Unfathomable

It's not always blue, ya know. Nice last line.

Gold (2nd place):

Jaza!

Sunlight on water
Steam rises from the bottom
Where spotted trout hide

The reason I put this here is because there are fish people! FISHYS!

WINNER:

BRONZE!

The mountain heaves forth
a cleansing stream of water
Life for you, renewed

Love that last line.

Pick a theme, Bronze, any theme.

HAPPY HAIKUING!

Ok, the judging is in!\r\n\r\nI'm going to give everyone medals!\r\n\r\n\r\n9th place Is a tie!\r\n\r\nSilentQ!\r\n\r\nRock spraying water,\r\nSplashing small droplets like rain,\r\nCreating a rainbow.\r\n\r\nD'OH! Last line is 6 sylables. But very nice description.\r\n\r\nchaozmachine!\r\n\r\nThe woods run bountiful\r\nThe water is crisp and clear\r\nLair of the angels\r\n\r\nD'OH! First line is 6 sylables. Yes, that is how I think of a ountain spring. Crisp and clear.\r\n8th place:\r\n\r\n\r\n7th place is off to:\r\n\r\nOwen153751!\r\n\r\nI swam in the spring,\r\nI glanced ahead; Waterfall.\r\nDeath from jagged rocks.\r\n\r\nPristine = peace. Jagged rocks = not peace.\r\n\r\n\r\n6th place goes too:\r\n\r\nhowlett!\r\n\r\nLooking from mountains\r\nCold water hitting my face\r\nMaking me cool down\r\n\r\nI just don't really like the last line. But yes, from experiance, it is very cold. \r\n\r\n\r\nWood (5th place):\r\n\r\nmarioman327!\r\n\r\n\r\nAtaraxia\r\nLiquid crystals shroud my woes\r\nDrenching me in peace\r\n\r\nI don't know what the first word means... but overall, ok haiku.\r\n\r\n\r\nBronze (4th place):\r\n\r\nTSL!\r\n\r\nCold and running clear\r\nIt seeps through the mountain air\r\nOnly to be drank.\r\n\r\nSeeps through mountain air? Is that one of your codes? Queers these days. Good Haiku. Just there are better.\r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nSilver (3rd place):\r\n\r\nhypoxia!\r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nOf the purest blue\r\nGlacial Water - cool to touch\r\nUnfathomable\r\n\r\nIt's not always blue, ya know. Nice last line.\r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nGold (2nd place):\r\n\r\nJaza!\r\n\r\nSunlight on water\r\nSteam rises from the bottom\r\nWhere spotted trout hide\r\n\r\nThe reason I put this here is because there are fish people! FISHYS! \r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nWINNER:\r\n\r\nBRONZE!\r\n\r\n\r\n\r\nThe mountain heaves forth\r\na cleansing stream of water\r\nLife for you, renewed\r\n\r\nLove that last line. \r\n\r\nPick a theme, Bronze, any theme.\r\n\r\nHAPPY HAIKUING!

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SilentQ

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Nomad

Posted December 9, '09 7:09pm UTC

bah! that's the last time I try counting syllables at 1 am. >.<

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Bronze

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Shepherd

Posted December 9, '09 7:16pm UTC

I'm starting to think I'm getting good at Haikus, thanks dudeguy.

The new theme is fitting I think, The First Snow

Or in other words, the first snowfall of the winter.

Hope it is a good theme! I'll put my haiku up later.

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hypoxia

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Nomad

Posted December 9, '09 7:29pm UTC

3rd Again :P

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dudeguy45

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Peasant

Posted December 10, '09 12:04am UTC

wake up at 9 clock
think your late for school, but no!
witness the whitness

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marioman327

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Nomad

Posted December 10, '09 12:07am UTC

Maybe you could've judged me better if you looked up what the first word meant >.>

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