ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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waluigi
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Shepherd

That reference in my last haiku was to Blue Oyster Cult's song Don't Fear (The Reaper), Mav. Some I am a lucky man I'll think of something to submit, probably later this week.

shock457
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Shepherd

Uprising

My heart is in vain,
I shall from from the ashes,
With a pure of heart

shock457
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Shepherd

**** autofix...

Uprising

My heart is in vain,
I shall rise from the ashes,
With a pure of heart

Skeleton_Pilot
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Blacksmith

It's 7 a.m.
Get out of bed, you slacker!
Time to go to work!

shock457
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Shepherd

It's 7 a.m.


4 syllables...
Skeleton_Pilot
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Blacksmith

4 syllables...


It's/sev/en/a/m

What syllable are you not counting, mister despAIRate? =D
Nater
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Nomad

I am home alone.
Trickery...and deception.
Therefore it begins.

rayoflight3
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Nomad

*****s be oppressed.
Finna cap an ofay's ***.
We ain't playin', son.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Due to the recent glitches locking this, I'm extending the due date to Oct 27th.

Jacen96
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Bard

Uprising

Why do you sit still?
With tyrants always oppressing?
Rise up for your freedom.


This my new submission, disregard last post.

~~~Darth Caedus

The_Gentlemen
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Peasant

Going to change my submission too.

The world is rising.
Dream, shattered. Germany, lost.
One bullet,to end...

waluigi
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Shepherd

Lift high your weapons
and declare to this world;
We cannot be owned.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

and declare to this world;

6 syllables.
lolsauce
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Nomad

Fingers crossed!

The pond is quite full
Many different fish swim
I watch them swim here

ProfessorOak
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Nomad

The pond is quite full
Many different fish swim
I watch them swim here


Either this haiku's meaning is extremely deep and obscure, or it has absolutely nothing to do with the theme of uprising.
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