ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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xerox
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Go! Do this,do that!
They all say in evil voice.
Or you wither, die.

Is it about with fear to make people do stuff for you?

Cats23
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Jester

With broken sword, Rise
from the bloodied ground and strike,
the Oppressors heart.

The_Gentlemen
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Peasant

Sorrt Cats, you're late.

Your haiku is awesome though.

murasaki9
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For "Fear Mongering" you mean someone that spreads fear?

Um...yes.

Is it about with fear to make people do stuff for you?

Um...no.

Ohhh...jeez... >_<
Fearmongering ----> Scaremongering = one inclined to raise or excite alarms, especially needlessly.

If it doesn't suit, I'll be glad to present a different theme. Just let me know. -_-
lC4l
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Nomad

Entering your minds
Taking away hopes and dreams
Destroying your souls

shock457
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Shepherd

Hmmm. Interesting theme, but I don't feel like joining this one. I want a theme that is actually happy (since most of the previous themes were depressing).

Do something like "Through the hoop". To me, it can resemble ambitions or achievements...

The_Gentlemen
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Over his junta,
of those whose mind is now loose,
Fear,dark prince, watches.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

NEW THEME - The Light at the End of the Tunnel/Victory

Sorry The_Gentleman, you'll have to scrap your haiku. People don't like the one I chose because the last ones were kind of depressing.

rayoflight3
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Nomad

*wrigglin' GI Style*
Oh ****! It's praziquantel!
Expelled to the light.

The_Gentlemen
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Peasant

No problems.
And call me the GentleMAN. That's just a typo I made.

I'l fight. Forever.
Thru pain. Thru fear. Fall, never.
Light. Will came. I'm sure.

murasaki9
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No problems.
And call me the GentleMAN. That's just a typo I made.
Okay, Gentleman.

This is more like it. Keep bringing it in, everyone!
lC4l
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Nomad

Through the corridor
From it's darkness into light
A true victory

Jacen96
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Bard

The War
As this long war ends;
Some fights won, but others lost;
We triumph at last.

~~~Darth Caedus

jdoggparty
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Nomad

When all hope is gone
He helps you out the tunnel
Appearing as light

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Salvation at last?
A faint glow in the distance;
Then its horn bellows.

(Train, if you didn't get that)

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