ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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superpickle
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Peasant

I sure need to pee,
The sea does look so tempting,
It will have to do.

Nater
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Nater
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Nomad

This is 6 syllables. Full/of/each/oth/ers/joy


******* ******* up my *******. I 'll work on it ******.
Nater
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Nomad

Waves of love pull me.
Deep down in your sea of lust.
Full of each others joy.



This was my old one. New:

Waves of love pull me.
Deep down in your sea of lust.
Sands of bliss beneath.
waluigi
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Shepherd

The crashing of waves
beckon me to leave this house:
sit at waters edge.

I may revise this, but for now, this is my entry.

mrTrippy
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Nomad

They come in slowly
flowing over my body.
Then leave with beauty.

MusicMan102
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Nomad

Watch the waves roll in.
Hear them crash against the bank.
To them, I am drawn.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

Swaying so gently,
taunting, to go swim in her.
Sapphire lover.

matth79
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Jester

A resounding splash
I am lying in the pond
I am cold and wet

HahiHa
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Regent

Unhasty seesaw
Between two forces, drifting
Away into dreams.

I don't know if this makes a lot of sense; I may have mixed a few ideas into one haiku. But I can't unwind them, and can't think of anything better. Wait and see..

MagicTree
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Nomad

Death in Japan

The crashing tsunami
Hearing the people cry out
Death has turned on me.

This is to honour my Japanese friend.


p.s. She didn't get hurt.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

The crashing tsunami


6 syllables: The/cra/shing/tsu/na/mi
acmed
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Nomad

I think the next theme should be "Hurricane" for the sake of the victims of Irene.

MagicTree
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Nomad

Death in Japan

Crashing tsunami
Hearing the people cry out
Death has turned on me.

Here we go...

FloydTC
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Nomad

ooh, I like ya waves
boom shaka laka laka
daamn, tide, you is fine

Sk8terjiff
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Bard

life giver to thirst
drawn by sirens to ease flame
immersed mind soothes soul

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