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Maverick4

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Peasant

Posted August 24, '09 12:48am UTC

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 19, '11 9:33pm UTC

Must have poems in by today or it will not count.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 21, '11 2:10am UTC

Dun dun dun dun!

Hey guys. Let's get the judging rolling. No long pep talk for now.

If you didn't place, blah blah, message me with poem, blah blah.

Snowing of the Angels was the theme with a total of 14 poems altogether.

Okay, pre-judging unofficial news. I had a brainstorm about a monstrous contest mixed in with the 10 Day competition. I'll tell you when the news is officially agreed on. Just wait...

Okay. Let's go.

I'm making the line bold this time. Teehee.

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5th Place: EmperorPalpatine

Softly descending,
They blanket the earth below:
Many become one.

I liked this one because it made sense. I saw the picture well, and the fact of you explaining the snow as real people joining as one. Nice.

4th Place: Seashark001

They fall from above
Singing their sweet song of joy
As they come to us.

My favorite was the second line. I like the image you've captured and put it beautifully into words. Yaaaaaaay. Keep it up.

3rd Place: Alexistigerspice

Like snowflakes they fall
Landing on rosy cheeks, and
Bless us with a kiss.

I liked the way you twisted the theme. It was quite nice. I hope you keep up the good work! It'll be worth it someday!

2nd Place: daleks

Coming from above,
Beautiful beings with snow,
Making this world white

I really liked this one. The flow was great, the wording was great, cake is great... um.... Good! Moving on...

1st Place Merit Winner: nichodemus

Pale and white she sobs,
Bittersweet an angel weeps,
Cradled in my arms.

I loved it. The flow and wording was absolutely merit worthy. Congrats. MERIT! Contact a mod. (:

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Well, that's done. Congrats to the ones who placed, and good job to everyone else!

This week's theme is my favorite Christmas song, A Wonderful Christmas Time, by Paul McCartney. It's cliche, but again, what isn't cliche about Christmas?

Okay. Due January 5th. Reason being is the same reason of Thanksgiving. Friends, family, celebrations, yadda yadda yadda.

Merry Christmas and good luck to all!

Dun dun dun dun! \r\n\r\nHey guys. Let's get the judging rolling. No long pep talk for now.\r\n\r\nIf you didn't place, blah blah, message me with poem, blah blah.\r\n\r\n[b]Snowing of the Angels[/b] was the theme with a total of 14 poems altogether. \r\n\r\nOkay, pre-judging unofficial news. I had a brainstorm about a monstrous contest mixed in with the 10 Day competition. I'll tell you when the news is officially agreed on. Just wait...\r\n\r\nOkay. Let's go.\r\n\r\nI'm making the line bold this time. Teehee.\r\n\r\n[b]_____________________________________________________________________[/b]\r\n\r\n[b]5th Place: EmperorPalpatine[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Softly descending,\r\nThey blanket the earth below:\r\nMany become one.[/i]\r\n\r\nI liked this one because it made sense. I saw the picture well, and the fact of you explaining the snow as real people joining as one. Nice.\r\n\r\n[b]4th Place: Seashark001[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]They fall from above\r\nSinging their sweet song of joy\r\nAs they come to us. [/i]\r\n\r\nMy favorite was the second line. I like the image you've captured and put it beautifully into words. Yaaaaaaay. Keep it up.\r\n\r\n[b]3rd Place: Alexistigerspice[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Like snowflakes they fall\r\nLanding on rosy cheeks, and\r\nBless us with a kiss.[/i]\r\n\r\nI liked the way you twisted the theme. It was quite nice. I hope you keep up the good work! It'll be worth it someday! \r\n\r\n[b]2nd Place: daleks[/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Coming from above,\r\nBeautiful beings with snow,\r\nMaking this world white[/i]\r\n\r\nI really liked this one. The flow was great, the wording was great, cake is great... um.... Good! Moving on...\r\n\r\n[b]1st Place Merit Winner: nichodemus [/b]\r\n\r\n[i]Pale and white she sobs,\r\nBittersweet an angel weeps,\r\nCradled in my arms. [/i]\r\n\r\nI loved it. The flow and wording was absolutely merit worthy. Congrats. MERIT! Contact a mod. (:\r\n\r\n_____________________________________________________________________\r\n\r\nWell, that's done. Congrats to the ones who placed, and good job to everyone else!\r\n\r\nThis week's theme is my favorite Christmas song, [b][url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V9BZDpni56Y]A Wonderful Christmas Time[/url][/b], by Paul McCartney. It's cliche, but again, what isn't cliche about Christmas?\r\n\r\nOkay. Due [b]January 5th[/b]. Reason being is the same reason of Thanksgiving. Friends, family, celebrations, yadda yadda yadda. \r\n\r\nMerry Christmas and good luck to all!

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Alexistigerspice

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Farmer

Posted December 21, '11 2:28am UTC

Oh my goodness, I actually placed! OIOIOIOIOI!
Alright ya'll, game on. This rodeo's about to get rough.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 21, '11 2:32am UTC

Alright ya'll, game on. This rodeo's about to get rough.

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Are you doing it?

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted December 21, '11 2:32am UTC

I won :O Thanks Acmed, didn't expect that!

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 21, '11 2:36am UTC

I won :O Thanks Acmed, didn't expect that!

YOU WANT ME TO UN-REWARD YOU????

HUH????

COME AT ME!!!

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted December 21, '11 2:38am UTC

Nah, it's the season of giving and surprises. :P

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daleks

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Chamberlain

Posted December 23, '11 7:54pm UTC

All around the fire,
With gifts wrapped under the tree,
What a great Christmas.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 26, '11 4:50pm UTC

...

Let me all remind you if you don't post by the due date, daleks wins by default.

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted December 26, '11 4:59pm UTC

You might want to extend it, since people are on holiday during the Festive period. Thinking of extending the poetry deadline already.

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Alexistigerspice

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Farmer

Posted December 28, '11 10:31am UTC

Christmas aproaches
Angelic voices singing
Raising our spirits.

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Seashark001

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Nomad

Posted December 28, '11 12:47pm UTC

Children lay asleep,
underneath an old man creeps,
laying gifts for them all.

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Alexistigerspice

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Farmer

Posted December 28, '11 12:52pm UTC

hehe that sounds creepy. Hate to say it but your last line is one syllable too long.

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acmed

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Nomad

Posted December 28, '11 5:10pm UTC

Alright fine.

I will extend the due date to the 10th of January. I'll also be gone from the 5th-8th, so that'll be good. (:

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nichodemus

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Grand Duke

Posted December 28, '11 5:14pm UTC

Quietly sipping,
A chilled beer from Belgium,
Tropical Christmas.

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