ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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nichodemus
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@Levory

The topic is in the Title.

murasaki9
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Oh, I 4thd this round. I think I'll go again.

Rain
When the raindrops fall
I see the tears running down
rain, tears, all the same

Schmiddy1234
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@Nichodemus


phew... i thought i might have been DQ'ed :O

@levory


u really need to use ur eyes next time XD
acmed
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No, I DQed in the previous round.


I think your haiku was fine, it just didn't place.
Maverick4
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how do u keep changing the name of the thread? Freakenstein? And how are u allowed to give merits?


The judge asks a moderator you change the thread. When the contest got large enough, and was fairly popular, I asked an administrator if a merit could be awarded to the winner. Obviously, it was approoved.
nichodemus
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Well Acmed, your counting skills failed as well!

invisibleninjagirl
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Dance in the Rain
When the floods rise up,
And the rain begins to fall,
We dance in the storm.

Good job, Tacky

EmperorPalpatine
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Clouds form overhead,
Ominous and powerful,
Releasing their might.

waluigi
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It's been awhile since I've been hear.

The earth: dead, ruined;
Vivified again as that
Sweet moisture returns

dudeguy45
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Peasant

hear.


*here!

*shoots waluigi*

(Passing it on)

cool drops fall sparsely,
but the pitter patter grows
clensing my being
acmed
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*here!

*shoots waluigi*


*sobs*

I love you, dudeguy.

*shoots dudeguy in joy*
killersup10
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5th place.........hell ya!especailly for the first ever post in this contest.


the greatest of crops
simple,powerfull it comes
the almighty rain.


^
| if the above is acually 4,7,5. then here it is fixed.

the greatest of the crops
simple,powerfull it comes
the almighty rain

if the top poem is correct than ya'll can just ignore this one

Schmiddy1234
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whoever told u the top one was wrong its right killersup

killersup10
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whoever told u the top one was wrong its right killersup



older sisters can really be untrust worthy -_-...........
Schmiddy1234
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:O ur older sister told u eh... yes siblings are untrustworthy

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