ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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FloydTC
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knock knock. housekeeping.
get out of here consuela!
I am busy here!

playaholic
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when a lady falls,
i will dash right to her side,
thats service to me


i hope thats better

XVERB
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so uhhh. *thinks* oh yea... when will this get judged!

EnterOrion
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when will this get judged!


That's a question, not a statement or exclamtion.

I already asked. I'm not judging it, that's for sure. If it's not judged I'll put in another theme and leave the judging stuck with Dudeguy.
Yodadude53
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My job really sucks
It is so very boring
But I want money

XVERB
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I already asked. I'm not judging it, that's for sure. If it's not judged I'll put in another theme and leave the judging stuck with Dudeguy.


thank you for filling me in on that. and next time i will try to be better with punctuation?
Kyouzou
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....Orion's a grammar nazi :|

chitown
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Orion's a grammar nazi :|


lol, that is so true.
EnterOrion
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and next time i will try to be better with punctuation?


[quote]....Orion's a grammar nazi :|
lol, that is so true.[/quote]

I lol'd.
Crab65
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Come here, lesser one
Bring me something to enjoy
And make it snappy

dudeguy45
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AHHHHHH internet was down. TOMORROW FOR SURE.

Crab65
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Why not today? It couldn't possibly take you that long.

Kyouzou
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I lol'd.




That's not a word, and therefore there should not be a period there.
Parsat
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What kind of grammar are you following? It could be Jabberwocky for all we care, and it would still need a period. Grammar quibbling is pretty pointless though, as long as it's not a glaring error.

Kyouzou
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I was trying my hand at grammar nazism.... apparently I'm not good at it.

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