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Reton8
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Building Inspection

I am the nail that sticks out of the board.
No carpenter seeks me, I'm left ignored.

I am the nail the carpenter started.
Whom after two strikes the carpenter parted.

I am the nail that fails its mission.
Please hurry and put me in the proper position.

Here is a building that lies on the ground.
I am the nail that kept the structure sound.
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I thought of this one in class. I was bored. Figured Id post.

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Ernie15
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Ehh, the rhymes were good, but the rhythm was a bit off. But what do I know about poetry...

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