Somebody told me to make a thread about my writings. So I guess that's what I'm doing. I love to write so don't worry about me quitting. I hope you guys and gals like my writings as much as I like writing them. Here's my first writing, a poem, entitled Freezing:
In my dreams I seem to sleep, In my life I'm a keep. If I bleed it freezes through, If I see it seems to lose. In my blood ice runs free, 'Cause I'm sleeping through my glee.
All my friends are all full of sleaze, Like a cold winter breeze. If I wake I will not stop, If I don't my clock will stop. It seems I'm freezing, Just as my victim stops wheezing.
My poetry always ends up dark and gloomy. It's just the way I write. Hope you like it : )
i like the story it got me thinking... when a story gets me interested it keeps me wondering, wanting to read on...... i thought it was a great story....
I'll gladly provide in-depth constructive criticism if you like - I'm one of the many writers on the site with at least a modicum of skill and depth, so ask and I'll provide.
