please comment on how is it,i am trying to improve my english,cos my only flaw lies in my languages
"wake up!" mother shouted at my face",school is starting in an five seconds and you are still in your pyjamas!"
realization hit me as i scrambled into the shower,before i knew,i was ready for school,gobbling down my breakfast,i sprinted quickly to school,which was a marathon away,i was so gonna be late.
i was a school athelete,also known as mr.long legs,so in minutes,i had reached school,sneaking from the principal,i concealed myself behind the roseberry bush,sneaking away under the cover of the bushes,suddenly,i bumped into a wall
"ouch",the wall,which i realised was a girl,"watch it!" she shouted at me,god damnit,cover blown,"sorry" she murmured softly as the principal strided towards us. Although she looked preety,i was so not planning to have a day of detention with her.
at the last few minutes of the day,we had a boring conversation
"hi" "hi" "whats your name?" "john,whats yours?" "janice" "nice name" "thanks" "whats your reason of coming late?" "woke up late,you?" "same" "ok" "......." "what class are you in?" "oh...same as you"
