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jdoggparty
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Well, here are my writings. None at the beginning, I will work over them for time. Anyone want to help with my story?

Main Character: Cheese
Friends of Juice: Juice, Ham
Other characters: Banana

Plot: To escape the refrigerator

Attempt: They slide through the bottom
Failure: They get stuck in the freezer

Attempt 2:
Failure: They get busted by Banny the Banana

Attempt 3:
Failure: They get busted by Banny
Afterwards: Banny changes sides

Adventure: To a Becky Mart (the main food market)

Problem: There are dogs

Attempt 4:
Failure: Ham gets eaten

Attempt: The other foods jump on the dogs fur
Success: Banana and Juice hold up his teeth, Cheese pulls his fur, and Ham gets out.

Conclusion: They make it to Becky Mart and they live happily in the storage room and meet other friends! They don't get bought because they are extra storage.

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Ricador
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Thanks man *sniff* you really know how to cut right to the core.

Armourknight
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A funny but thinnish plot. This could work..

jdoggparty
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Thanks man *sniff* you really know how to cut right to the core.


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