ForumsArt, Music, and WritingSector 9: Game Story Line

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Intro: He wakes up in a room wonders who he is. He needs to get out because he senses danger. He is in some sort of facility yet he can't figure out where.
Chapter 1: After he breaks out of the room he is in a hall there are guards facing away from him at the end of the hall he sneaks into the room across the hall it is some sort of office and he needs to find tools to escape into the next room.
Chapter 2: He sneaks into the rom next to it and finds more tools this time it a gun. He looks into the drawer and finds a silencer. He goes into the hall and shoots the gaurd and continues into a big grey double door. The room appears to be a laboratoratory. It is filled with machines and capsules containing people. A man walks in and says " hmh I see made it out." then he laughs and says "so you see what I will do to you to disable your powers" then he walks over you try to fight him off but he injects a serum into you and you fall asleep.

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Nomad

tell me what you think about the story line

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I'd really like your feed-back so please comment!

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Heard of patience?

Well, is this a point and click game?
It might be easier to figure out if it is a good storyline if we knew what type of game it is.

But otherwise it seems interesting, though your synopsis is kinda short.

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sorry im not the most patient person in the world yes it is a point and click adventure game and im sorry but what is synopsis

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Synopsis is... Nevermind.
Just saying that you might have wanted to write it out more in detail, but nevermind that.
It seems to be interesting, especially if it can keep the atmosphere.

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yeah im looking for more twists and turn and hope to add more to the story im gonna add more just let me think.....

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Nomad

I've come up with more I will post it tomorrow

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I've come up with a complete 2 more chapters again will be up tomorrow so look there ok?

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