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This is a poem I wrote last night in my boredom. Please tell me what you think.


Disappear.


As I look around me I see despair.
I wonder if anyone could care.
Before me I see what is yet to come.
Behind me I see all the things I've done.

I have no clue as to where I am.
People keep talkign about this "Lamb"
They all looked around in fear.
And asked each other why their here.

We were all formed in one line.
Though it looked long it took no time.
A man with a book sat there.
He beckoned me to come here.

His eye's were filled with sorrow.
He told me "For you, there is no tomorrow."
"Why did you not, listen to me?"
" I died and rose, just for thee."

"For your sins I paid the price."
"I made the biggest sacrifice."
"I loved you with all my heart."
"But now its time for you to depart."

"Into the firey pits of hell."
"Is forever where you will dwell."
"You had your chance and it you missed."
"To ask me for your forgiveness."

"Have mercy on me God! Please!"
I said as I fell to my knee's
He looked at me with those sad eye's
And I knew it was time for my demise.

Two angels came and dragged me away.
I cried out, but He looked away
I can smell the sulfur and brimstone.
This will be my new home.

They threw me into the pit.
And I knew that this was it.
A firey burning sensation
Is all I feel in my condemnation.

My last thoughts were of you.
Of what you didn't do.
You didn't tell me about hell.
This place where I must dwell.

You didn't tell me about the savior.
Who could've saved me from this danger.
He was crucified but rose again.
He paid the price for MY sin.

Three steps is all it takes
To be with Christ for all life's sakes
Admitting your sin is the first one.
Then believe He was the perfect One.

Confess him as your savior
Then you will be with him forever
So simple are these step's to do
But I never knew thanks to you.

Eternal suffering is for me.
Because of your Hypocracy
I can't wait for you to disappear.
P.S.... wish you were here.....