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15Master1
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Since i can't use the edit button i'll just write a new topic with 4 new pictures. Too bad that the quality gets worser when i scan it.
http://s53.radikal.ru/i141/0911/bf/2e4be3b681b4.jpg
http://i017.radikal.ru/0911/64/b8971db2eb99.jpg
http://s45.radikal.ru/i107/0911/3b/37fc79896dac.jpg
http://s50.radikal.ru/i127/0911/d6/fdb81613a7b9.jpg
And the old Pictures:
http://i050.radikal.ru/0911/07/8434d677ba62.jpg
http://i064.radikal.ru/0911/92/d387888408ab.jpg
http://i037.radikal.ru/0911/9c/8fe06ad7eda8.jpg

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15Master1
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Nomad

Links to Images:
http://s53.radikal.ru/i141/0911/bf/2e4be3b681b4.jpg
http://i017.radikal.ru/0911/64/b8971db2eb99.jpg
http://s50.radikal.ru/i127/0911/d6/fdb81613a7b9.jpg
http://i050.radikal.ru/0911/07/8434d677ba62.jpg
http://i064.radikal.ru/0911/92/d387888408ab.jpg
http://i037.radikal.ru/0911/9c/8fe06ad7eda8.jpg

MarioMario
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Nice new pics dude!So how many more will you make?

15Master1
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Nomad

Nice new pics dude!So how many more will you make?
idk...
15Master1
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Nomad

Comeon i need reviews

Cenere
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Jester

Comeon i need reviews

Only if you stop bumping/spamming.

The style is somewhat interesting, quite simple too on most parts. You might have wanted to adjust the images a bit so that they were more aligned, or rather: the character would stand more vertical. I would also recommend that you do not upload more than one or two in a post unless you want utter silence like this instead of comments, as it is rather hard to go through them all separately when there is as many as there is.
But generally speaking they seem alright, quite simple, some of the lines are smudged a bit which is a bit sad...
And you have a fascinating anatomical correctness in the anime hero.
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These pics are garbage. Learn to use a photo editing program and get good. I've seen 5th graders draw stuff 10x better than this with crayola crayons.

Your shading is completely off, the 3D effect of the characters is missing due to poor shading.

This looks like charcoal drawings on scrap paper. Try to draw something serious.

15Master1
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These pics are garbage. Learn to use a photo editing program and get good. I've seen 5th graders draw stuff 10x better than this with crayola crayons.

Your shading is completely off, the 3D effect of the characters is missing due to poor shading.

This looks like charcoal drawings on scrap paper. Try to draw something serious.
But... i'm in 5th grade! And i don't realy like to use photo-editing software, well i have photoshop.
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Nomad

Ok if you really are in 5th grade then it's AS bad. But these are pretty bad pictures. You shouldn't state it's an art portfolio, because that says that you're a refined artist and this is your best work. These are doodles.

Secondly, you shouldn't head straight into anime and cartooning. I know it might seem boring but it really does help to take up drawing life things. Start with objects, sketch them best you can. The best you can render light onto paper with graphite paper, the better artist you will be.

jizkanda9
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But... i'm in 5th grade!


5th grade? How old are you? >.>
thisisnotanalt
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They're fun little doodles, but they're not really quite to art and they don't form a coherent portfolio.

15Master1
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5th grade? How old are you? >.>

11.
Ok if you really are in 5th grade then it's AS bad. But these are pretty bad pictures. You shouldn't state it's an art portfolio, because that says that you're a refined artist and this is your best work. These are doodles.

Secondly, you shouldn't head straight into anime and cartooning. I know it might seem boring but it really does help to take up drawing life things. Start with objects, sketch them best you can. The best you can render light onto paper with graphite paper, the better artist you will be.
i don't really enjoy drawing.
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