I hope this is okay with you because i need to enter this for my final english grade and i need to know if it is okay
This is the story of a boy,a boy like any other,until that terrible night.Donnie reyes parents are well off meaning they are neither poor nor rich.His father is a very kind man who helps others without question and smiles at everyone he meets.His mother is beutiful and gentle,she makes everyone feel good and Smile.
Donnie left that morning not knowing that it would be the last time he saw his parents happy.He walked to the bus stop and went to school,There he met his friend Toby.They talk until the bus arives and then talk more untill they get too school.
Now the story will be told by Donnie.
After school Toby and the guys asked me to play baseball with them i said sure it would be cool.Well it was but we ended up playing untill around 10:00P.M.
I hurried home and running through alleys knowing that i would be in trouble.When i got home i knew something was wrong.The door was kicked down and Dad's car was gone. I slowly entered the house,I checked the living room,Empty.I checked the Kitchen,Empty.I checked my parents room empty. i went back to the living room and soon i heard a man yell and a woman scream,Shortly after i heard a gun shot.I swallowed down vomit and continued on.
I searched for the source of the noise and found a trail of blood leading to the basement.I slowly opened the door and went down the stairs.The basement was pitch black.I looked for the light switch, then turned it on. i looked into the room to see my mother tied to a chair crying.A man was holding a gun up to her head,below him was my father with four bullets in his chest and he was staring at me he mouthed the word "Go".The man then said "So your still alive old man well ill fix that",He shot my father in the head.I Bit my tongue and felt the tears trickle down my cheeks.Then the man said "Now im going to make your mother watch you die.I backed up against the wall,He pointed the gun at me the my mother screamed "No,not my baby please let him go".The man laughed then hit her with the gun.He pointed the gun back at me.I didn't feel anything but i knew i had been shoot,i slid down to the ground.My mother screamed and then murmered "Please,Please kill me".The man laughed and untied her then he gave ger the gun and quickly left.She thought i was dead,i thought i was dead.She stood up out of the chair and started to shake,her legs started to buckle and then she fell to her knees and dropped the gun.She sat quietly shaking and sobbing then she picked up the gun and said "Don't worry baby mommy's coming".She put the barrel of the gun to her mouth then bit it.I felt the blood pool in my mouth but i tried to speak,"Don't do it". It was faint oh so very faint i closed my eyes and then i heard the pop and then the splatter of the blood.I knew then that soon i will join my Family.
