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Moabarmorgamer
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Right...so, I think that The Adventures of ArmorGames was the biggest hit I ever had on this site, and figured I'd use the same principle; use player characters. So, I'm writing a mystery story. To keep the mystery element(you know, it's not nice to know the perpetrator beforehand), you may not pick what you are, though you may request it in my email(jjnapper@yahoo.in). I predict that this will be a big project, so I will be accepting only the best. Because this is a mystery story, your sheet must be detailed for there to be a good storyline and character depth, you know. So, I will be writing the story, but you will be giving me the characters. Not that I can't make my own characters, but I think that having yourself in a story is a lot of fun(Moat will be making a cameo, of course). I will not divulge any further. This is, after all, supposed to be a mystery.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Weight:
Height:
Hair Color(style optional):
Eye Color:
Skin Color:
Personality:
Background:
What They Like:
What They Dislike:
Iconography(what they usually carry with them):
Miscellaneous:

Right...so, I will be accepting as many people as can be, then I will be picking the best from there.

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Name:Seth
Age:21
Gender:Male
Weight:175
Height:5'11
Hair color: Black
Eye Colorark grey
Skin Color: Slightly Tanned, white.
Background: Former military Colonel
What they like:Sci-Fi, Weapondry
What they dislike: 'Sparkly Vampires'
Iconography: Military jacket, combat knife in side pocket
Misc.:N/A

Moabarmorgamer
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You need a far more detailed background and you need to add the Personality.

Sarthra21
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Very Well...

Personality:Won't do much to hurt anyone since the war, less they wronged him.
More to Background...

Was injured in war, and his daughter was kidnapped by a gang.

Moabarmorgamer
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...Seriously. More detailed, please.

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Name: Orion Sagittarius
Age: 54
Gender: Male
Weight: 154 pounds
Height: 5'11"
Hair Color: Normal mad scientist hairdo, like a matted down Einstein hairdo; it's gray and white
Eye Color: Yellow
Skin Color: Slight tan
Personality: Likes astronomy, although he is extremely wise and a great problem solver. He has an eccentric type personality, although he is quite reliable.
Background: The descendant of a long line of scientists and politicians, he decided to make his mark in astronomy, and has performed dozens of experiments. Even though he is relatively young, he is quite wise. He is also one of the best problem solvers ever, and loves a good mystery.
What They Like: Wisdom, Order, Pizza
What They Dislike: Fools, Idiots, Fools
Iconography: Normal lab coat, which he is always in.
Miscellaneous: He hates fools with a passion.

Moabarmorgamer
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Yellow

Yellow eyes..can you change that? No one really has yellow eyes, do they?
EnterOrion
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Yellow eyes..can you change that? No one really has yellow eyes, do they?


Nope. It has something to do with his name, in extension the stars.
Moabarmorgamer
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Nope. It has something to do with his name, in extension the stars.

I'm trying to make this realistic. Nobody has yellow eyes, can't you have his belt stamped with the Sagittarius symbol or something?
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I'm trying to make this realistic. Nobody has yellow eyes, can't you have his belt stamped with the Sagittarius symbol or something?


Fine, then I want this guys eyes.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/f/f7/OCA1_Auge.jpg/180px-OCA1_Auge.jpg
Sarthra21
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Alright, an hour or so to think and heres the background;

A grizzled army Colonel that fought in Iraq returns home to discover his daughter had been kidnapped by a gang of local hoods. He feels he may need more help to find, and learn what this gang has done with his one and only child.

Moabarmorgamer
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Right...so, the daughter was never found? Or was that just an outline?

Sarthra21
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Has not been found yet. Very few leads.

Moabarmorgamer
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Wait, you don't make the storyline for the mystery, you know that right?

Sarthra21
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da... sh1t... I've ruined Christmas!

Moabarmorgamer
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What? What do you mean?

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