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Flowers. Flowers are always nice. They are like bright and cheery.

Until they get killed by the weeds which oppress them.

well thats sortered here is a flower poem that i made when i was COMPLETELY BORED

flowers are weird
flowers are dumb
They make me laugh
when im eating my thumb
flowers sing this song
when all is wrong
and then i say
stop eating my thong
and few laydown to here this song
that is because
they're eating their thumbs
flowers are weird
flowers are dumb
They make me laugh
when im eating my thumb
flowers sing this song
when all is wrong
and then i say
stop eating my thong
never give up
never stop eating
or else the world
would be like thinking
and you dont want to think
or you will see a thing
a thing of despair
and darkness too
which will make hell
come to you
flowers are weird
flowers are dumb
They make me laugh
when im eating my thumb
flowers sing this song
when all is wrong
and then i say
stop eating my thong
as i lay down
hereing this song
i realize one thing
this song is bad
and everythings sad
so off i go and stop this song

LOL leo99, reminds me of Shel Silverstein

Who is Shel Silverstein?

A famous children's poet. He wrote A Light in the Attic, Where the Sidewalk Ends, and The Giving Tree

Leo, this is sort of my thread . . . .

And work on grammar, and divvy the poem up into stanzas.

Leo...you don't post poems on other peoples' threads unless the OP says you can.
Orion, to get rid of those symbols, type the poem on Notepad. Or, really, anything but Microsoft Word. xP
It's good. Dark theme kinda reminds me of my old poems lol. Sometimes the lines are uneven(syllable-wise), but it's still a good poem.
=D

Where did they even come from?

Song of Our Nightmares

Suicide, insanity,
Happiness, ecstasy.
Horror, sanity,
Mania, Euthanasy.

You've ran a million miles,
You've sung a million songs;
You've brought a million smiles,
You've shown me what belongs.

Laughter never ceases,
Happiness never ends,
I've picked up all the pieces,
Then life all transcends.

They've torn a million lives,
They've killed a million people;
Not one person survives,
They're hung from the steeple.

Horror never ceases,
Misery never ends,
They've picked up all our pieces,
Then death all transcends.

I've saved a million souls,
I've killed a million killers;
I've riddled them with holes,
I've killed the blood spillers.

Murder never ceases,
Killing never ends,
I pick up all their pieces,
To hell they transcend.

Suicide, insanity,
Happiness, ecstasy.
Horror, sanity,
Mania, Euthanasy.

Killing never ceases,
Hell never ends,
Holocaust's the pieces,
To history it transcends.

Flowers. Flowers are always nice. They are like bright and cheery.

Until they get killed by the weeds which oppress them.

Came from your commas. On Word documents, commas, apostrophes, and the ilk cause symbols when c/ped onto AG. I dunno why.

Oh okay. Is there any way to get rid of them without not using Word (Word Processor technically)? I sort of use it for everything.

Uhhh...when you paste it onto the AG chat bar, backspace all the symbol-causing characters, and type them again before you click Submit. A bit of a pain, but it works.

Flowers rise,
They greet the day,
They grow in size,
They do it, everyday.

Anyway,

A bit of a pain, but it works.

fine i wont post another poem sorry orion i was feeling bored (ashamed smiley here) but seriously i hate poems i just cant seem to make my mind think of them which is why i never try yours are pretty good orion except they're a bit depressing

oh yeah and i gave you a happy topic flowers thats what you wanted

except they're a bit depressing