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marioman327
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Hey everybody. Next school year I'll be starting classes dealing with graphic design, so I wanted to put up some of my artwork to see what I need to improve on, change completely, etc. Criticism is much appreciated, more so than compliments, although those are ok, too xP

Here is my first design, called Night

http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn35/marioman327/thenight.jpg

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leo99rules
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i like it especially the moon it has that mysterious feeling there really inst much i could criticize unless i be really picky so i'll leave it at that

valkyrie1119
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It's really good. I can't find any complaints.

SilentQ
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It's awesome! The only thing I can find wrong/weird is the grass along the road. It needs more perspective. You should start with the grass at the back, then go forwards, so you can see the front grass first. Right now, it looks like you made the grass randomly, as some of the middle and back grass is in front of the closer grass. Get what I'm saying?

Otherwise it's perfect!

marioman327
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Right now, it looks like you made the grass randomly, as some of the middle and back grass is in front of the closer grass.

That's actually exactly what I did xP But yea, I think the grass is kinda funny, too
marioman327
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http://i300.photobucket.com/albums/nn35/marioman327/TheEnd.jpg
Next picture, called "The End"

superpickle
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surreal... but i like it

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