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Moabarmorgamer
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I decided to do this, so I could touch up on my Latin skills. I have written a poem in Latin, and I invite fellow bilinguals(or further) to do the same. And even if you don't actually know another language, feel free to join in and use a translator.
This poem is suckish, but what do you expect?

In cruor perfusus terra praelium.
Somes erant sparsum totus super.
Tamen victus fleo.
Silenti etc erant nunquam aevum.

Vos fleo, vos fleo, ut operor Ego
Poena subsisto intemporaliter
Monumentum quod poena subsisto, tamen nostrum amicitia es absentis
Tamen sententia nostrum lacrima cruor sicco.

Which, roughly translated to English, means:

In blood soaked battle land
Bodies were scattered all around
Still the living weep
The dead were never age

You cry, you cry, so do I
The pain remains forever
Memories and pain remain, however our friends are absent
Despite thought, our tears clean the blood

I'm pretty sure that poem just broke my record for Worst Poem Ever. Only about two lines rhymed, and none of them had the same syllabic length. But what can you expect, it's in a different language. But the English version actually isn't that bad of a prose. Also; excuse the grammar. Grammar Nazi Moat is sitting in a corner sobbing(fleo). In the "Silenti etc erant nunquam aevum" line, I actually wanted to put "vita", life, instead of "aevum", age, but I had to use something that at least remotely rhymed with &quotraelium", and the two had almost similar endings. Lol.
Anyways, somebody want to show me and my (nonexistant) foreign language poetry writing skills up?

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thisISanalt
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I'd probably be able to conjure up a crude French poem~

Parsat
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SlimyGames
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This was cool, with the latin and stuff!

kingryan
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Grrr Parsat, I was going to do that....

Hmm...what about this:

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Gotta love Base64, however now I think about it I think that YouTube encodes video urls in this...

Parsat
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LOL...reminds me of the old Fail awards. I'm pretty sure the poem should actually go like:

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cyB3aW4sDQpJIGZlZWwgbGlrZSBzb21lIEdpbi4NCg0KVGFrZSBtZSB0byB0aGUgc3RhcnMsDQpB
bmQgZmx5IG1lIHBhc3QgTWFycy4NClRvZGF5IEkgc2hhbGwgZmx5LA0KSGlnaCBpbnRvIHRoZSBz
a3ku

Darkroot
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Just quoted a famous quote in Czech.

BÄžte ven a dÄlat to, co máte dÄlat.

Run outside an do what you should do. - My translation (proper one)
Just go out there and do what you have to do -Englished translation.

Man the OP is so lucky that you go to learn latin. I had to learn French and I could never motivate myself to. Latin just sound much cooler and all plants and animals have their latin names.

kingryan
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Farmer

Ah Yes Parsat it does make much more sense like that.

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A0KVGhvdWdoIGNvbnN0aXBhdGVkIHlvdSBjYW50Lg==

playaholic
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tip:dont try japanese

Yodadude53
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I can speak Russian

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