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cowmaster1
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Shepherd

This really well written! I want to read all the chapters leading up this one! I like it

OperationNilo
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Shepherd

This is a great story! A great addition to ArmorStories!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

I like how you began near the end and then showed us the first chapter. I have a feeling this is going to be a good one. Congrats!

Cinna
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Nomad

Mm well written

CommanderDude7
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Nomad

The fight between George and David is heating up. lol

cowmaster1
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Shepherd

Does Benjamin work?

sprite14
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Nomad

why are there so much accented 'a' and '?' marks in Diamonds???

Kevin4762
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Nomad

The name sounds way too similar to "Of Mice and Men." I think you should change it.

Kevin4762
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Of Mice and Men is a classic novel about petty tyranny, this seems like a silly story about actual mice. You shouldn't use the name of a classic American novel for your own story.

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