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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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Parsat
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Spring has come again:
I know from cherry blossoms
And the croaking frogs.

I glued soft feathers to my arms

Kyouzou
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I glued soft feathers to my arms
A desperate attempt to escape
The stiff breeze lifted me high
And a vista of farms caught my eye

Alas the sun turned on me
And I fell from the heavens
Crashing the clouds
To a watery grave



Strange Life

Parsat
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Strange Life
Stranger Dealings
Strangest Feelings
Stranglehold On Me
Estranged From Reality

No greater band of brothers have I met

aknerd
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No greater band of brothers have I met
Than Barry, Brandon, Bob and Bret.
Every day to work they went
Every night at bars they spent
Time together, until the sun set

When Bret was taken by his heart (too weak)
The three mourned for a week
At work his shoes they filled
At bars his drink they spilled
But they still missed a brother, unique

Then Bob was destroyed (smashed by a truck)
The two aware of their fading luck
Hurt too much, work did not rebound
Into their drinks they drowned
The last half sunk into muck.

Brandon took too many chances (shot by a dealer)
The one lost his only healer
Now he's alone, homeless
Drinking liquor in excess
His wife leaves, never again to feel her

Last of all, Barry removes himself (a rope)
The rest dead, he couldn't cope
In their office, a plaque reminds
In the bar, stools miss their behinds
A fragile fraternity, never any hope.

The annoyance

MoonFairy
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The annoyance
Of that gol darn bee.
Thinks that he can keep pestering,
Me?!

Never
Will I ever
Let that bee leave alive.
For I,
The evolved one,
Have the element of suprise.

SMACK
Almost gotcha!
SMACK
Get back here!!!!
SMACK
C'mere Buddy!
SMACK
I'm your worst fear.

So he thinks he can beat me?
Thinks he can just leave?
Fly out of MY window?
And into the breeze?

No way bud.
Not today.
I've got a fly swatter.
And it is your butt I'm gonna slay.

_____

I'm gonna stop here lol. This could go on forever XD


The devil's hands hold up all the cards

Parsat
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The devil's hands hold up all the cards,
He peeks over shoulders and loads all the dice,
And still somehow we must defeat him:
Only way to win is to fight fire with fire.

Ours is a drill to pierce the heavens

EnterOrion
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Ours is a drill to pierce the heavens,
Used to crush the Gods above.
We march to Hell with all our weapons,
Destroy all that is left of love.

Feel the pain of Satan's wrath,
For he lives within.
Welcome to a great blood bath,
Killing is no great sin.

Enticed into killing,
Ready to die,
Soon to kill us all;
What is left is quite thrilling,
Killing for one great lie.

Welcome to pain,
We're all here to perish,
Playing in our blood rain,
Killing is to be cherished.

Enticed into killing,
Ready to die,
Soon to kill us all;
What is left is quite thrilling,
Killing for one great lie.

I felt like writing some death metal. xD

Next line: Burning with rage,

slayguy8
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Buring with rage,
like an endles fire.
Like the olympic torch,
Cannot get my disire.

My anger still burns,
with all its might.
Going all through the day,
When will this end.

This feeling of fire,
Is driving me crazy.
Why did this happen,
To me is hazy.

It is all a big fog,
Whats this about,
This makes me want to scream, kick, and shout.
But as soon as it stared.

It seemed to end,
Like it never happened.
My dear dear friend,
The End.


The thing hit me

Eless
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The thing hit me
It bit me
It fit me
is me

Too short..?

Anyway

[/b]I had waffles for breakfast[b] (that can be poetic)

slayguy8
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Had waffles for breakfast,
covered in surup.
with melted butter,
and powder sugar.

The flavors mixing,
a great sight.
It tasted so good,
actually might.

have another later tonight.


The lake is as still as glass

aknerd
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My first instinct is to go with "it's still cause it's dead", but I feel like I may have overused the genre, so I'll write something... happy(ish).

The lake is still as glass
Trees watch as silence overwhelms me
I play the quiet game
Daring the birds to be first
Knowing they'll be last

I yell a summer warrior's cry
Smashing into the water
Breaking the lake into shards
That return peacefully to home

My echo travels around the lake
Followed by a chorus of birds
The lake, no longer glass
But fresh cut grass

Ready for a summer warrior.

Did I ever tell you?

Kyouzou
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Did I ever tell you?
How much I love you

Did ever tell you?
How much you mean to me

Did I ever tell you?
That you're the apple of my eye

Did I ever tell you?
That you're the light in my life


How many times

Parsat
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How many times
Did I run to where you were?
How many times
Did we secretly confer?
How many times
Did I say what you meant to me?
Those were the times
I was wonderfully free.

No greater love is this

GhostGS
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No greater love is this
as my heart beats with eternal bliss
i sit here, with no worries
but my stomach still churns and flurries
i feel nothing without you
but fulfilled when combined as two

my first poem on the topic so srry if it aint up to scratch.. anyway heres the line
As i sit in the shadows

Kyouzou
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As I sit in the shadows
My life flashes before my eyes
Despair, Depression, Loneliness
They dominate my survival
Such is the life that I lead

And then I remember
When you came into my life
Shining through the darkness
Like an angel from heaven



What shall we do?

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