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Thomas1st2
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This is nothing really just a little poem I wrote to remember 9/11 (Yes I know it was rememberance yesterday I was busy) (Also not sure where to put this)

The Poem:

They Might of Bombed you
They Might of Killed you
They Might of Choked you
They Might of Shot you
They Might of Destroyed you
They Might of Murdered you
But You Will Never Be Forgotten

Thanks for reading











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Kyouzou
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Jester

Nice poem, but it belongs in the AMW.

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

Eh, it might belong here since it's about 9/11, but it might've been more appropriate if the thread was just about the bombing, so maybe this does belong in the AMW.
Also; you know there's a difference between "of"(there are three of us) and "have"(I have decided to correct you).
And it's just....seems kind of simple.

greg_greg
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Peasant

its a nice and simple poem.

th100
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Nomad

How exactly is "choked" related to 9/11?

BenTheBozer
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Nomad

I would assume that choke would be related to the dust of the building.

TheTerminator
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Nomad

All of those capitalizations bother me.

Asherlee
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Shepherd

Just curious, but is it purposely "They Might of..."? Or are you trying to say They Might've?

wwiifan
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Nomad

idc, its a great poem. Its the message that matters. NO MATTER WHAT- NEVER FORGET.

holt24
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Nomad

Never forget what they did! I never will. It burns in my mind all the time how those sick people did that.

wwiifan
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Nomad

Whenever I see a video about it, or read a story (poem, etc) about it, it just fuels the fire in me to try to fulfill my wish of joining the Air Force and being able to serve my country like others before me.

Drace
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Nomad

Lmao...

You're gonna love learning about American imperialism.

holt24
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Nomad

Whenever I see a video about it, or read a story (poem, etc) about it, it just fuels the fire in me to try to fulfill my wish of joining the Air Force and being able to serve my country like others before me.


I hopw that everyone responsible for that tragedy dies because the sooner they die the sooner they go to Hell.
wwiifan
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Nomad

we gotta find Al-quida first, kill him, then go from there. Easier said than done of course

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

we gotta find Al-quida first, kill him, then go from there. Easier said than done of course

Rofl.
For one thing...you misspelled Al Qaeda. For another, Al Qaeda isn't a person, it's a terrorist organization.
And how can you be a fan of WW2 when you're complaining about the Twin Towers? I mean, I'm not saying 9/11 wasn't awful, but you're whining about hundreds of deaths when apparently you're a fan of millions...? Doesn't make sense.
holt24
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Maybe we could just find an area with a high concentration of terrorists and poison all the goat meat so they will eat the goat meat and die.................................................................................................................................................................................................(Yes it was a joke incase your wondering)

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