ForumsArt, Music, and Writing[old] A key that unlocks there death!!!!

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darkwolf1
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just add gunpowder and a thing that you put tnt in it.as you go into a building with the explosive,it will get harder and harder into the building because of the security is in there.after excuse after excuse,you will finaly get to that point.and you put in that key,A key that unlocks there death!!!!

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ZeroComp
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Nomad

Well said Orion!

darkwolf1
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Any more that you people want to ask,because I am getting tired of you three beeng here,so back off for the last time!!!!!!!!!!!

EnterOrion
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Any more that you people want to ask,because I am getting tired of you three beeng here,so back off for the last time!!!!!!!!!!!


Just take my advice. Seriously.
darkwolf1
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are you shore that "I" should take youre advice?!

Hypermnestra
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Orion, I think he meant "burned alive".
K Wolf, I'll leave. I would advise everyone else to do the same. He neither wants nor can make use of any CC we can offer him. And out of politeness as well, we should stop.

One last piece of advice though; if you want people NOT to comment on something, DON'T share it with them.

darkwolf1
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kk.

ZeroComp
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One last piece of advice though; if you want people NOT to comment on something, DON'T share it with them.

Exactly what I was going to say.
SlayerShadow
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hey what about antimatter lasers man you got to try it. antimatter is so cool.

darkwolf1
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that sounds soo cool.How do i get my hands on one!!!!

Snake211
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i am not afraid to die!!! lol

darkwolf1
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SPARTAIN LAZER!!!!*BANG*!!!!!!!!!!!

TheCheeseMaker
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Darkwolf, you've already been told many times about the grammar, but what people say is true. I do not understand what this is. Are you trying to build up suspense? If so it is not working.

These people, the frequent visitors of the Art, Music, and Writing section, are trying to help you become a better writer. Of course you should take their advice! Many of the people here are very good writers. Maybe you could take the time to spell check. It will save you time instead of telling everyone about how you are "still working on it".

Frankly, I am so annoyed at you and your writings. It's elementary(like the Twilight series) and it is hard to follow.

I am sorry, I truly am, but it had to be said.

Peter20
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wow that was pretty terrible try using writing words instead of the thing you put tnt in also maybe you should rearange words (so it still makes sence)but is in an order that sounds better

slayguy8
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stop whining about his grammar he isnt better thatn any of you people ok and stop hasseling him and this sounds cool and different

Hypermnestra
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I thought he told everyone to leave.
Teh irony is ironic...the people defending him and his story are actually going against his wishes.

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