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escartian
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http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/Bob.jpg?t=1286498162
This is the cover page...
More coming soon...

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1337Player
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Can't wait. I guess...
Nice drawing skills, reminds me of Diary of a Wimpy Kid in a way. :P

Wait, so you're just going to make adventures of stick man Bob? Will they be good?

iMogwai
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Maybe you should let the stickman have four fingers instead, for some reason it looks more realistic in cartoons. Homer Simpson and Peter Griffin, for example, are both four-fingered.

bigjacob
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Sounds like something i want to take a look at.

Cenere
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Maybe you should let the stickman have four fingers instead, for some reason it looks more realistic in cartoons. Homer Simpson and Peter Griffin, for example, are both four-fingered.

I believe that is simply because that is easier to draw with them plump hands they have. Fingers are unreasonably thing irl > >

You need a little cropping on the bottom, just to cut off the extra space, but otherwise keep to the style. It looks promising.
escartian
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You need a little cropping on the bottom, just to cut off the extra space, but otherwise keep to the style. It looks promising.

Thanks for the advice.
I am scanning the pages right now, so it should take me awhile to get it all back here.
Should I put in the concept art? It was a fail attempt at trying bird's eye view (and the pictures were hard to draw so there isn't much in it)
Don't worry about the fingers...He doesn't have them latter on...
escartian
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http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/BobMap.jpg?t=1286504589
http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/BobStart.jpg?t=1286504619
Start at the part 1
http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/Bob1-1.jpg?t=1286504785
And here is the other side to it
http://i816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/Bob1-2.jpg?t=1286504863
Diagonal arrows mean go diagonally

escartian
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Sorry but some arrows get cut off so you may have to do some side scrolling as well as vertical scrolling
[url=http://armorgames.com/community/thread/6416109/the-adventures-of-stickman-bob] This is the link to the album

escartian
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I need people to answer this one question I have?
Should I add a small comic style thing before I go on to making the second part of the game? If the answer is no then i shall place part two here...
(By the way, with crop updates the thing should be easier to read now because there is no need for horizontal scrolling)
For the album visit
http://s816.photobucket.com/albums/zz85/escartian/Adventures%20of%20Stickman%20Bob/

halogunner
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dude flash is expensive some people arent rich

escartian
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dude, own flash

Even if I did
A) I did all of this during school at lunch time. I would have to waste time at home for flash.
B) I use Linux so I am not even sure the Flash thing will work on my computer (technically it should)
C)Flash is only good for people who will use it (often) I do not have the time for that
D)Flash is expensive.
E) If I get flash I need a tabloid(to draw right on the computer) too
F)A good tabloid is expensive ($200 and up are the high quality I would use with flash, and even then the pictures are small and take longer to draw on the computer
G)I would have to learn Action Script (that would hinder my C++ learning)
H) I would have to redraw all the pictures I already drew
I)This one (doublesided) page would be the whole first game
J)I have 5 more such games to make because I have 5 more pages
Hopefully that is enough for you...
Should I just place part 2 (the game) or should I have a comic transition into part 2 (to fill in the gaps)?
Please Answer
Tubaca
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this is awesome waitin for part 2

cptbignuts12
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i got lost in the story but sounds promising

redfox0071
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isnt it bob

escartian
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I took this with my phone instead of the scanner... and now I am seeing how it turns out. If it is poor I shall do it again. (this is the comic version of part 1)
http://lh4.ggpht.com/_lfUiZfdfj8Q/TPcKAWL71FI/AAAAAAAAADk/3-t9ohZxc84/s512/IMG004.jpg

Th3Sage
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I can hardly read anything on that one.

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