[A picture of a village in the mountains appears. Snow is falling.]
Narrator: Once... A long time ago. There was a village in the Mountains.
[It zooms in and the screen fades to black. A new picture appears that shows people walking in the village square.]
Narrator: A man once lived here... He changed the history of the world. His name... Jack Frost.
[The screen fades black and a new picture appears. It shows a christmas tree. Jack Frost puts a star on the tree. He turns around and the screen changes to includ other people in the house. They are his family]
Jack Frost: Well... That solves things! Only one day away from Christmas.
[A man that looks somewhat like Jack speaks. He is Jack's father.]
Jack's Father: I'm proud of you. Thank you for inviting us all here.
[A bunch of soldiers come in through the window. They have machine guns. There is screaming.]
Soldier: You all have to come with us... Unless you name is Jack Frost.
[The screen turns black again. A picture of Jack sitting outside his house appears. Snow falls on him. His head is down.]
Jack Frost: How could I have let this happen...
[A little girl comes up to Jack.]
Girl: Mr. Frost. Why isn't your candy shop open?
{Jack smilies.]
Jack Frost: It's closed on Christmas Eve... Anyways... I have a little problem. Nothing you should be concerned about.
Girl: Oh...
Jack Frost: I'll be leaving for a while...
[Jack hands the girl some keys.]
Jack Frost: These are the keys to the candy shop.
Girl: Thanks.
[The girl hands Jack a necklace that looks like a snowflake.]
Girl: Here. Maybe this cane help you.
[Jack puts it in his pocket.]
Jack: Thanks.
[Jack stands up and and walks away. The screen turns black.]
Character
Information
Name: Jack Frost Age: 22 Gender: Male Job: Candy Shop Owner Bio: He used to live in New York City, but then he and his family moved the the mountain village of Frostville.
Sorry... The mistake I found was the Girl says "This cane may be help". That's suppsoed to be "This may help you. Also. I forgot to add apearances to Jack, and his dad. Here's Jack's:
Tall, blue eyes, short black hair.
His dad's:
Medium height, blue eyes, short grey hair with a little black.
The [] explain things like scenery and the {} tell you what you should do.)
I also forgot Jack's Starting HP and MP.
HP: 100 Mp: 0
Tutorial
[Tere is a forest clearing. There is a tent. There is also a camp fire. Jack Frost is standing there. A little box pops up.]
Box: Hello! My name is Zyphon. Creator of Jack Frost RPG. I'll help you get start. There's a little arrow in the corner. Click on it.
{Click on the arrow}
Zyphon: Great! Now lets get on with the game play. Use the arrow keys to move. Do this now. Click on the "x" to close this box.
{Click on the "x"}
{Practice moving}
Zyphon: Great! Now go over to the tent and click "space".
{Close the box}
{Go over to the tent and click "space"}
[A box appears. There are two buttons. One says "Save" and the other says "Heal".]
Zyphon: Click save to save your progress and heal to restore you hp and mp. You'll learn about the later.
{Click the arrow}
Zyphon: In this game you don't heal between battles so healing is very important.
{Close the box}
{Close the box}
Zyphon: Now move over to the fire and click space
{Close the box}
{Move over to the fire and click space}
[Another box comes up. This one is split in two. The left side has different buttons. The right is empty. The buttons on the right screen are:
Grubs: +1 Hp
Grub Stew: +5 HP
Twig Salad: +10 HP +1 All Stats/1 battle
Bird Meat: +20 HP +5 Speed/1 battle
Bear Meat: +50 HP + 5 Strength/2 battle(s)]
Zyphon: This is the "shop". You have to trade items for the objects in the shop. Sometimes you have to buy them. You get items by going into battle.
[An opening into the forest lights up yellow.]
{Click the arrow}
Zyphon: Walk over to the glowing area and press "space".
{Close the box}
{Walk over to the glowing area and press "space"}
[The screen turns black.]
Battle 1, World 1
[Jack is standing on the left of the screen. Trees are in the background. On the other side is an owl. The is a little box on the bottom of the screen. There are 12 spaces. 10 are empty. One had a portrait of Jack. Below that is a heart with "100/100" next to it. below that is a blue orb with "0/0" next to it. Below that it says "Attacks". Below that are to squares. One shows fist and the other shows crosed hands. Below that it says "Items". There is nothing below that. The other is a portrait of the owl. It only shows the owls HP (heart) and MP (orb). The owl had 35 Hp and no MP.]
Zyphon: This is the battle screen.First click "Combat".
[The picture of the fist glows yellow]
{Close the box}
{Click combat}
[Jack jumps towards the owl then punches it. A big red number "10" appeared above its head. The owls HP decreased to 25]
Zyphon: You just dealt 10 damage. "Combat" does the same amount of damage as your strength.
{Close the box}
[Jack jumped back. The owl flew over to Jack and pecked him. A number 5 appeared over Jack's head. His HP went ot 95]
Zyphon: Now lets try "counter".
[The other button glowed.]
{Close box}
{Click "counter".}
[Jack crossed his arms. The owl flew at him and pecked him. A number "0" was over Jack's head. Jack punched the owl before it flew back.]
Zyphon: Counter does the same amount of damage as your defence. Finish this battle.
{Close the box}
{Finish the battle}
[A black box opened showing Jack's portrait. Next to it was a bar. It filled up a little. In the bar it went from O% to 10%. Items were at the right of the bar.]
Enemy "Owl"
HP: 35 MP: 0 Items: Bird Meat 50% Feather 75%
[The campsite was back in veiw.]
Zyphon: To check your skills and inventory just click on your character. Click on the enemy you want to target if there are more than one.
I'll finsih the story and the enemies then I'll start working on it. Counter is overpowered at first... But Jack's class is magic man. That means he sucks at fighting. It's not scrolling. It's like a Sonny-Sinjid mix. The game has a unige way of earning stats. Skill points are basically you use them to unlock skils, but stats are different. Depanding on your class it takes a different amount of stat points to upgrade your states. normals 2 per stat, but for Jack he needs 3 points for strength, 2 for speed, 2 for defence, and 1 for magic. Same for everyone with the class. Other classes it may be different. But your right. Counter is overpowered. I'll say... Half of your strength. So... change it with the battle for the owl.
Hints
[Campsite]
Zyphon: I'm sure you've noticed the you have to wait on turn before using Counter. This is the cooldown. Good luck!
P.S: scroll your mouse over an attack or item to see what it does.
Zyphon: Hmm... Seems your stuck on this level. Might as well leave.
{Close the box}
[The screens turns black. It says defeat.]
[Campsite. There is a new opening. This one is smaller.]
Zyphon: The new opening is the training zone. You'll have to fight until you find what your looking for. Good luck!
{Close the box}
{Go train}
Training 1, World 1
[Bear.]
{Kill the bear}
[ You now have 95% EXP.]
Training 2, World 2
[Rat.]
Jack: ... A rat? Really?
{Kill the rat}
[You have leveled up.]
Enemy "Rat"
HP: 5 MP: 0 EXP: 5 Items: None.
Hints
{Click on Jack}
[A screen pops up. It has two sides. The one on the left says "Skill". Below it it says "Points: 1". There is a picture of the necklace from the beginning. The one on the right says "Stats". Below it it says "Points: 10". It also says:
[Jack is walking through the forest. The screen zooms in on his necklace. A pulsating glow is coming from it. He comes to a clearing and there is a giant tree. The snowflake symbol carved into the necklace is one the tree. The mark on the tree starts to glow.]
Jack: What's going on?
[The ground starts to rumble. A giant polar bear emerges from the ground.]
Polar bear: I am Snowfall... The guardian of this shrine. You must prove you are worthy!
Boss: Snowfall
Jack: Who are you?
Snowfall: No talking! Fight!
{Kill Snowfall}
[Snowfall reaches 1 Hp.]
Snowfall: You are powerful... But not enough!
Jack: Not again...
[Snowfall turns into a knight with blue armor. Jack gets full HP.]
Sir Snowfall: Go to the shrine... It will help you.
[Jack walked over to the shrine. It glew more intesly. There was a flah. Went it was gone Jack looked different. His hair was white, his suit was now white, and he was holding a black staff with an orb mounted on top. The orb had a slowly spinning giant snowflake.]
Sir Snowfall: Frost... My master...
Frost: What is going on?
Sir Snowfall: You must stop it before it is too late.
Frost: Before what is too late?
[Sir Snowfall vanished.]
Hints
[Campsite]
Zyphon: Frost is now Ice Element. He can now learn and upgrade skills he now had Frost Suit (+10 Defence, +30 Ice Absorb), Frost Pants (+10 Defence, +30 Ice Absorb), The Frosty Staff of Snow (+15 Magic, +30 Ice Damage, +30 Ice Absorb), and Frost Dress Shoes (+10 Speed, +10 Ice Absorb). Go upgrade you skills now.
{Upgrade you skills}
{Upgrade stats}
[The picture of the neclace is gone. Instead there is a picture of a staff pointed at an ice cube with a figure in it. Above the picture it says "Ice Cube Level 0".]
{Best course of action: Get Ice Cube}
[The name changes to Ice Cube Level 1 (Next: Permafrost). If you put your mouse over the picture it says "Stuns the enemy for one turn.
Next: For the rest of the battle the enemy's speed is lowered by 5."]
