I decided I'd try and post some of my poems on here, since I liked the first line poem thread so much. I would really like some advice on how to improve. Thanks!
I changed it, you butt. :/Read into the next page.
lmfao.You should be a regular in the Tanka, I'm determined to make it gain popularity
You should be a regular in the Tanka, I'm determined to make it gain popularity
Lulz, that's what friends are for silly :PMoon, I'll work on my Tanka skills too (hm sounds... different)and be regular too. Besides, I need to another type of style under my belt
That winky face makes me nervous, Supa. D:
Hehe, don't be I can only be so harsh, no more no less.... I think I almost got my tanka down ;O
Woohoo. I will read it at some point today.I'm starving so give me some food.I'd eat cereal but I'm not in the mood,Throw me some meat;anything to eat,Or I may act very crude.
I'm starving so give me some food.I'd eat cereal but I'm not in the mood,Throw me some meat;anything to eat,Or I may act very crude.
Good work, Tacky.Can't really fault you on anything.
SupaLegit, please take the flirting elsewhere. And whatever you feel like Tacky.
Since I am exceedingly depressed that our thread got locked, I think I'll write a depressing limerick.There once was a wonderful thread.Even better than sliced breadThen it got locked,And I lost a sock,And now I'm losing my head.
I know, right? :PIt should get some sort of award.
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