ForumsArt, Music, and Writing[Necro] Nonet Contest (Theme: I, ruler of the world. Due: April 1.)

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StrategicCaptain
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Nomad

A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. Rhyming is optional.


Here are the rules:
1)Your poems must be original. (No plagarizing)!
2)Your poem must be made specially for this thread. (No taking your old work!)
3)Your poem must fit the weeks theme.
4)Your poem must be submitted by the deadline.
5)You may only submit one poem.
6)Sorry you can't win two weeks in a row. (but you can still submit!)

If this thread gets popular, then maybe the winner could get a merit.
The deadline will usually be on friday, which in tis case is April 6th

This weeks winner, will have the opportunity to be a judge. If they do not want to, then I will ask second place, and ect.

Start posting your poetry!

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TackyCrazyTNT
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It's been so long since I joined one of these.... here we go. I'm a bit rusty.

Will you put on your finest armor?
With gleaming breastplate and red shield-
Unsheathe your sharpest weapon
To once again fight death.
Return in triumph,
We'll welcome home
The greatest
Hero,
You.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

Any last ditch efforts?

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Submissions for this round are now closed; judjing will follow shortly.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

That is correct^

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

There's only 99 words total in the submitted entries. That means if you read just one word per hour, it would take you 4.125 days (4 days, 3 hours). Therefore, judging shouldn't take longer than that. Just saying.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

My internet was of for 2 days, so I hope you will forgive this lateness.

3rd Place: EmperorPalpatine

The quest begins with a single step;
A trek to regain my true love:
For she was taken from me,
By a lame loathsome brute,
While I was away.
I shall prevail,
Valiant;
Fearless;
Brave.

This poem pleases me, but lacks the charm and sway the other poems had. A decent effort still, it is.

2nd Place:

Will you put on your finest armor?
With gleaming breastplate and red shield-
Unsheathe your sharpest weapon
To once again fight death.
Return in triumph,
We'll welcome home
The greatest
Hero,
You.

I liked the repetition of the superlativ in the first and third line. It really added the feel of embarking on a quest with it. This poem also makes me think of the first zelda.

1st Place: Jeol

How do heroes embark on their quests?
Are they always valiant men?
Or are they simple persons?
Are they common, like me?
Yet, heroes commit
To challenges,
And end as
Victors,
All.

The thought of "a common hero" really appeals to me in this poem. There are no major faults in form and spelling, so I must give this on the first prize.

Quirinus1
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Shepherd

The next theme is: I, the ruler of the world
The next deadline is: 7th of September

MagicTree
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I rose from the slums to reach this point.
As to gain such authority
I, the ruler of the world,
Dominant above you.
I shall seek revenge.
Those filthy scum who
Caused me pain
Shall End
Tonight.

EmperorPalpatine
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Those filthy scum who

Should be 4 syllables but it's 5 and

Tonight.

should be 1 syllable but it's 2.

I'll submit mine later.
MagicTree
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I rose from the slums to reach this point.
As to gain such authority
I, the ruler of the world,
Dominant above you.
I shall seek revenge.
The scum who
Caused me pain
Shall End
Now.

All better! I'm kinda new to nonets.

EmperorPalpatine
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The scum who

This is 3 syllables, it should be 4.
MagicTree
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I rose from the slums to reach this point.
As to gain such authority
I, the ruler of the world,
Dominant above you.
I shall seek revenge.
All the scum who
Caused me pain
Shall End
Now.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

I've defeated countless enemies;
A massive crowd of opponents:
No one shall stand in my way.
I have made the order
To ensure my rule:
Conformity!
They will bow,
Or they
Die.

acmed
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Nomad

A Nonet ay. Might as well put my poetic ability to the test.

http://www.blogcdn.com/www.joystiq.com/media/2010/03/gamknucklecrack580.jpg

All Hail

By being owner of all your souls,
My power shall not be surpassed.
Hark to me at my commands,
Or ye shall face the one
Who kills on the spot.
Bow before me.
Your freedom
Is now
Mine.

acmed
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I gots a question: Does the winner of the contest get a merit? If not, a cookie?

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