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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Bladerunner679
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5,7,then 5
syllables makes a haiku
this is the main rule.

I love doing this
it is fun and a challenge
but I'm rarely here.

-Blade

Darktroop07
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Okay
They seem fine to me.
they are also quite unique.
Which makes them special.
-FJV

Schmiddy1234
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Da Hybrid ^^

The cows always moo
and of course, you do too, ha.
Human-cow hybrid xD

Darktroop07
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Schimiddy's armatar XD
The lazy otter.
How it floats on the water.
With its lazy look.

Schmiddy1234
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Tin/Aluminum Foil

Shiny tin foil
Used for wrapping gum and things
reflecting sunlight (lol)

Schmiddy1234
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Thanks Darktroop! i really like that poem ^_^

Eminem

Eminem is beast
Top of the rapper mountain.
Thank you eminem


I <3 Eminem he is so good

Schmiddy1234
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Daprokitteh

It's Daprokitteh! (me)
Sittin at this chair, writin'
Writes dapro poems

Schmiddy1234
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Tyga(rap artist)

Travie Mccoy's cuz
Rack city is pro, he's da
mutha of da beat ^_^

Schmiddy1234
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Girl's Thoughts

Girls' brains, how dey work?
Thinking about things guys don't.
Complicated Maze.

lol this one was a weird one, but eh... lol

Rapyion
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Schimiddy1234, you have a lot of haiku poems on your mind. Totally.

The Clear World

The very-clear sea
Is now being polluted
By darkness itself.

The very-clear skies
Is now made black and murky
By dirt in the air.

The very-clear sounds
Is now disturbed by screeches
Made from round circles.

Note that the last lines of each stanza, they are man-made technologies and man itself.

murasaki9
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I feel depressed. Look at DT07.

Let the rain fall down
I feel like I am drowning
please don't let me down

Darktroop07
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Depressed Happiness
Depression is nice.
It helps you reflect upon.
It is happiness.
@murasaki did you mean my haiku's are depressing or, is that the name of your haiku?

murasaki9
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@murasaki did you mean my haiku's are depressing or, is that the name of your haiku?

Your haikus are depressing.

what I would give for
nothing at all, just a shell
just a puff of smoke
Darktroop07
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The ever lasting depression
I am depression.
I will continue taunting.
I am infinite.

murasaki9
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In response
wow, I'm depressed too
life is way to hard, it burns
I wish it'd just chill

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