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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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murasaki9
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Power
Can you grasp it still
do your muscles still tense up
when you feel its pull

Its gravity tugs
it has a beckoning glance
to bring you back now

murasaki9
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This is my first attempt at a huiku so don't laugh if I've got it wrong XD

Thank you for contributing, Jazmoon. I appreciate your efforts.
Your haikus are really sweet.
Rapyion
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I have now realized that this thread is down and is not visible at first glance without scrolling. I shall now bump this with a haiku!

Competition

Yes, competition.
It happens in everything.
To see which is best.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

It's back.
It has returned now.
My pride and joy my bio.
I am so happy.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

It's back.
It has returned now.
My pride and joy my bio.
I am so happy.

murasaki9
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Fuss
What is all the hub
Why are bios so up, up
do people care much

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

I love my bio
Of course they are pride.
They help show your righteousness.
And their very nice.

Jazmoon
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My cat Jaz

You ball of fluff,
sharp noises sung as you cry,
climb, up, down, round, round.

Three white socks, hung low,
fourth stretched high, bushed of tail,
eyes ivy green, shine wide.

Crazed mind, legs that kick,
you source me mice and birds too
my vivacious puss.

That's my three haiku poems about my cat Jaz and as you can tell shes totally mad =P.

Jazmoon
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Peasant

My cat Jaz

You ball of fluff,
Sharp noise sung as you cry,
climb up, down, round, round.

Three white socks, hung low,
fourth stretched high, bushed of tail,
ivy green eyes, shine wide.

crazed mind, soft sweet fur,
you source me mice and birds too,
my vivacious *****.

There is my three haiku that describes my mad cat Jaz =p

Jazmoon
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Peasant

My cat Jaz

You ball of fluff,
Sharp noise sung as you cry,
climb up, down, round, round.

Three white socks, hung low,
fourth stretched high, bushed of tail,
ivy green eyes, shine wide.

crazed mind, soft sweet fur,
you source me mice and birds too,
my vivacious puss.

There is my three haiku that describes my mad cat Jaz =p

Darktroop07
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triple threat.
A triplet of post.
two must be removed right now.
for it isn't nice.

murasaki9
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Jazmoon, you posted three times!!! Not allowed if the content is pretty much the same.

Falling, falling now
you must never know what I
in my pain know now

Jazmoon
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So sorry there was a glitch and it didn't post the first two times but now it has, like i said i'm sorry, didn't mean to spam

murasaki9
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So sorry there was a glitch and it didn't post the first two times but now it has, like i said i'm sorry, didn't mean to spam

Hey, hey, it's all cool. I didn't mean to sound so stern. I just can't put up with spammers and I mistakenly thought you were trying to spam.
So, yeah, my mistake!! You're clear!!
Bladerunner679
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My first true day off
it's been months since I got one
wonderful feeling.

-Blade

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