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murasaki9
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I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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kevin8ye
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Nomad

Something lurks nearby
A dark, sinister presence
It's a guy named Phil

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Sadly it's not me.
since you almost described me.
My name isn't phil.

murasaki9
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murasaki9
1,388 posts
Blacksmith

thank you Murasaki9 for the invitation to post here

You're welcome! And welcome to Haiku Land! Thank you for your contribution!

There is but one hope
and that is that this world lives
on and on for now.
jkl3848
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jkl3848
242 posts
Peasant

What's done has been done.
There is no returning to...
Our wonderful past.

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Do you have any tips of counting syllables?

I'd recommend searching the words on a dictionary site that shows the breaks in pronunciation (like dic-tion-ar-y).

Walking through the woods;
A page! "Don't look... or it take-!"
Slenderman appears.
murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Well, welcome back, Emperor!

TGIF, Kids
Enjoy the weekend, it's here
but, not for long, sad

kevin8ye
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kevin8ye
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Nomad

Sadly it's not me.
since you almost described me.
My name isn't phil.


Is that why ur called darktroop?

ANYWAY my poem from haiku contest:

Voices everywhere
Murmurs break the silent air
Abrupt end of words.....
pangtongshu
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pangtongshu
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Jester

ANYWAY my poem from haiku contest:


I shall copy the idea of bringing in my haiku from the contest!

Blackened hearts watching
Slowly lowered with hushed sound
Grievance shows no peace
starcutie55
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Nomad

~Fall~
The Leaves are falling
They move, Gracefully, Swiftly,
The leaves are almost gone

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Is that why ur called darktroop?

More or else correct.
Because I am the shadow.
stalking your shadow.
murasaki9
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1,388 posts
Blacksmith

Well...we stayed alive here. Despite my uncharacteristic, usual absence.

Speak louder, I'm deaf.
Shine brighter, I cannot see
Love harder, I'm cold

Roccess
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Roccess
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Peasant

Um, I'm back, apparently. (Maybe some of you remember me from a few months ago? No..?)
So, I couldn't find a topic anywhere in the last few pages, if there was one. (I just quickly scanned, mind you) So, I'll start with something random.

Joining

Joined the conversing,
Only in the Haiku form.
Am I doing this right?

Roccess
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Roccess
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Peasant

Answering My Own Questions

Oh no, no way, no!
Answering my own questions.
The last line was off.

murasaki9
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Blacksmith

Haha! Welcome back, Roccess!!!
It's good to have one of my Haiku'ers back!
Here's a good haiuk.
Beat it
It was good knowing
you and all your friends get out
it is over now

Roccess
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Roccess
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Peasant

So, I'm assuming there's no topic..?

Here's a Haiku that doesn't make much sense, and isn't really one of my favorites, but seeing as I've only written a few..

Hello

Hello, Ni Hao,
Bonjour, Geia So, Aloha,
Guten Tag, Salve, Hola!

I dont like this one because I can't tell some of the syllables apart like the Greek or Chinese, but I hope this is right...

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