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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

I love writing Haikus. My best friend taught me how to write them. He said ' It's not that hard. All you have to do is learn.' So I did and I fell in love with them. Here's my first Haiku:

Clear like Crystals
It is clear, you know
that what some don't know, we do
albeit, they will.
03/21/11

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Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

Judgeship of what, Mav?
The judgeship of some contest?
I am so confused.

mrTrippy
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mrTrippy
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Nomad

The Haiku Contest.
Mav quit a couple weeks ago,
And passed the big torch.

LilystarofFlameclan1
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Nomad

look at the goldies,
haikuing away today,
posting forums here.

LilystarofFlameclan1
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Nomad

how about pickle?
that sounds like a good one, right?
i love pickles, yay!

EmperorPalpatine
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EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

Pickles are alright:
Like a salted cucumber,
But a lot better.

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

You foolish people,
believing pickles be great.
It's cake for the win.

cablecar1
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cablecar1
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Nomad

Or some chocolate!
Chocolate is greater than
Any other food.

Pazx
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Peasant

This thread really sucks.
I am going to leave now.
Peace out nubs. Four Five.

LilystarofFlameclan1
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Nomad

just because youre king,
doesn't mean you can be mean
lilystar is out

cablecar1
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Nomad

Trying to rhyme,
In a Haiku is as dumb,
As chugging whiskey.

LilystarofFlameclan1
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LilystarofFlameclan1
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Nomad

rhyming is so fun
so you are very wrong, dude
first line is messed up

Trying to rhyme,
cablecar1
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cablecar1
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Nomad

Thank you Lilystar
It should have said something like,
"Trying to make rhymes"

Alexistigerspice
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Alexistigerspice
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Farmer

La la la la la!
This is my La La song n00b!
Now sing it with meh!

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

This thread really sucks.
I am going to leave now.
Peace out nubs. Four Five.


His name be Pazx.
King he is, bringing this note
our haikus, not great.

Pazx does have a point though. Our haiku's aren't really thought out, more just morphed into a conversation with a haiku form.
VinceNeille
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VinceNeille
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Shepherd

La la la la la!
I'm singing with my freind!
What song do we sing?



Forced Motivation

Darkness surrounds him
His death, inevitable.
But, with this, he still shines through.

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