Forums → Art, Music, and Writing → [necro] Thoughts of a psychopath.

I don't know what this will be called (a poem or what ever) but this was the first load i am unloading.
I feel like im in a dark room.
Pitch black with no light to see.
People say im tough but life's tougher than me
People I knew once are like "Baggoo who is he?"
You dont know how it is to be
Abandoned Forgotten like u seize to exist.

If you're going to write a poem or whatever you decide to call this, at least use correct grammar.

If you're going to write a poem or whatever you decide to call this, at least use correct grammar.

Thats fine. Here you go. Grammar Check Now you can check it easily before posting a poem.

The problem is dair, that poets often bend the rules of grammar ever so slightly and subtly.

Well yeah, but stanza for poems work there, I've tried it. And it doesn't automaticly correct your grammar, just points it out for you. That way you can decide to change it or not.

Here are some pivot animations

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another pointless animation.

English is not my mother language, I tried to convey myself in the best possible way I could but again english is not my first language.

Here

as remorse turned guilt,
a dysfunctional man was built,
and the present existed only as drying paint,
of an image that the past would quilt.

with permission i would also like to unload my thoughts under this thread, peace.

all this time I have wept in sorrow,
but my past might hold a new tomorrow.