^I have this all set to music and it flows very well. Its the first song ive written so far!

I thought any song?

I thought any song?

OP asks for a song written by one's self

My song:

Verse 1:
Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking
You see that I am shining but every body's looking
You see me;Yeah!Yeah!

Chorus:
I see myself;in a mirror
And I see the one
inside of me
but when you I inside my heart
You can see the one;

Everyone one is trying, trying really hard.
But me I'm shinin', sparklin', glowing like a star.

I'm Dewing me, being me, rising to the top.
Every one is thirsty, drinking me like soda-pop.

You're guzzlin', I'm bubblin, climbing the Mountain.
The Mountain Dew nation,
The Mountain Dew nation.

Lil' Dew-ezy, the Carter
welcome to the Dew charter...
of Mountain
Drink that fountain...
soda pop.

Dew the Dew and be you just like
Lil' Dew-ezy Dew.

Rap for the 1st one, metal for the 2nd, hard rock for the 3rd.

Emp, I'd say the second lyrics would sound better with a hard rock type feel to it. I can't really imagine a guitar part for it right now, but a basic syncopated drum beat would be kinda cool under it.

Verse 1:
Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking
You see that I am shining but every body's looking
You see me;Yeah!Yeah!

Chorus:
I see myself;in a mirror
And I see the one
inside of me
but when you I inside my heart
You can see the one;

I think if you were to make this one into a full song you should make it alternative rock, sort of like linkin' park. It just sounds like a rock song but with some extra little effects. I'd say have a fast rythm running under the effects, but keep the effects at a moderate pace, nothing more than eights and try to keep rests where possible. I really like what im seeing in your song.

Okay dude

Verse 1:
Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking
You see that I am shining but every body's looking
You see me;Yeah!Yeah!

Chorus:
I see myself;in a mirror
And I see the one
inside of me
but when you Iook inside my heart
You can see the one;

Verse 2:
Yellow light is flashing everybody is talking
Yellow cabs are passing
but they don't care about me
But when i see my future and i say...

(CHORUS)

(CHORUS)

Rap:
Yeah I got it,
Everything I heard from my mom I got it
Everything she wanted from me I got it
Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;

(CHORUS)[i]

Verse 4:
One day I be the biggest thing yeah!
Oh yeah,Oh yeah!
I'm gonna be the next biggest thing.

Do you guys like my song?

Rap:
Yeah I got it,
Everything I heard from my mom I got it
Everything she wanted from me I got it
Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;

I really hope this isn't really the rap..

Rhymes "I got it" with "I got it" with "I got it"

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A quick rap:

See now this is disastrously
A catastrophe that i can't believe
And it's hard to see, how we used to be
But I'm livin and I'm gettin a lil fittin in my spittin..for these rhymes i keep hittin
(quick dramatic pause)
Harder. And I swear I told her
I've gotta go bolder
But I just keep hittin the ground
Harder each time I'm falling down