Any song writers out there with some lyrics they think could make it big? not asking for a whole song, and dont worry i wont steal them. Just wanna see what the general mood of the songs is these days, so Have Fun and get writing!
Hey Emp..what genre did you have in mind with those lyrics?
Rap seemed to work quite well with 'em..especially with a brief pause after each line...using that pause as a brief build-up of anticipation that comes rushing in with the next line...and then so on from there
Verse 1 don't know where im going but i know what im leaving from maybe you can help me tell me what it is you want and i cant quite remember what it is i wanted to forget maybe its forever maybe its just happiness Chorus well i know that you've got much better things to do and thats all right love is a privilege its not my right
Verse 2 remember when you told me that you didnt care at all and everyone around you wondering when it is you'd fall but me i never questioned everyones sane, ive lost my mind everybodys changing why should it be different this time
Rap for the 1st one, metal for the 2nd, hard rock for the 3rd.
Emp, I'd say the second lyrics would sound better with a hard rock type feel to it. I can't really imagine a guitar part for it right now, but a basic syncopated drum beat would be kinda cool under it.