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kirks011
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Any song writers out there with some lyrics they think could make it big? not asking for a whole song, and dont worry i wont steal them. Just wanna see what the general mood of the songs is these days, so Have Fun and get writing!

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kirks011
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Rap for the 1st one, metal for the 2nd, hard rock for the 3rd.


Emp, I'd say the second lyrics would sound better with a hard rock type feel to it. I can't really imagine a guitar part for it right now, but a basic syncopated drum beat would be kinda cool under it.
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Verse 1:
Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking
You see that I am shining but every body's looking
You see me;Yeah!Yeah!

Chorus:
I see myself;in a mirror
And I see the one
inside of me
but when you I inside my heart
You can see the one;


I think if you were to make this one into a full song you should make it alternative rock, sort of like linkin' park. It just sounds like a rock song but with some extra little effects. I'd say have a fast rythm running under the effects, but keep the effects at a moderate pace, nothing more than eights and try to keep rests where possible. I really like what im seeing in your song.
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Okay dude

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Verse 1:
Sometime's life is flashing,every one is talking
You see that I am shining but every body's looking
You see me;Yeah!Yeah!

Chorus:
I see myself;in a mirror
And I see the one
inside of me
but when you Iook inside my heart
You can see the one;

Verse 2:
Yellow light is flashing everybody is talking
Yellow cabs are passing
but they don't care about me
But when i see my future and i say...

(CHORUS)

Verse 3:
I see the shining lights,
the fancy cars;
the tall buildings
what else you want;
but when you look inside my heart
you can see the real me Oh yeah;yeah yeah...

(CHORUS)


Rap:
Yeah I got it,
Everything I heard from my mom I got it
Everything she wanted from me I got it
Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;

(CHORUS)[i]

Verse 4:
One day I be the biggest thing yeah!
Oh yeah,Oh yeah!
I'm gonna be the next biggest thing.

Do you guys like my song?

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Rap:
Yeah I got it,
Everything I heard from my mom I got it
Everything she wanted from me I got it
Yeah I know moms can predict the future Oh yeah Oh yeah Oh yeah;


I really hope this isn't really the rap..

Rhymes "I got it" with "I got it" with "I got it"

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A quick rap:

See now this is disastrously
A catastrophe that i can't believe
And it's hard to see, how we used to be
But I'm livin and I'm gettin a lil fittin in my spittin..for these rhymes i keep hittin
(quick dramatic pause)
Harder. And I swear I told her
I've gotta go bolder
But I just keep hittin the ground
Harder each time I'm falling down
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I'm being me and Dewing me.
I'm the Poke master everyone else is just a Pokemon
Ditto.
They copy me.
Flock to me.

D. Carter,
I ball harder.

Fizzle to the top like carbonation.
Welcome to the Dew-ezy nation.
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A short rap in the style of MTN Dew Lil Wayne commercial.
The lyrics are mine, but it's written for Dewezy.

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