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Strop
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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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DDX
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Nomad

uhh.. it is for strop. Just do it once for stroppy and you can pick the next one.

phsycomonkey
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...
I don't like rap,
to me it sounds like crap,
so just stop this thread
before i chop off your head,
Even if I did
I'd still pop off my lid
So just stop this game
it is very lame...
Thats my feelings, but I dont mean for you to stop this, just felt liket posting this, Rap is art to, but I still don't like, no offense to anyone

sonam
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hey i am asian too you know, just live in U.S

I will just do one for hope for sloppy

Hope in the world is dying right now,
we have to figure out a way to stop it, but how
unity is the thing that solves problems
think of united states as small kingdoms
how would we ever get to travel around more,
and life will just be a bore

BlackFang17
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This is a battle I set-up for some guy..........

I'll HIT HIM LIGHT , he ain't SPITTING RIGHT//
Murderous? he can't even KILL A MIC , his TEXT is like his SEX , scared to drop , talkin about "I got a headache , SORRY NOT TO-NITE"!//

Hes THE GAY TYPE , I HATE GHOST , cuz hes a dead man WITH HIS LAME POST//
You know why he wanted me to drop first , HE WANTED TO TAKE NOTES!//

He only SPEAKS HARD trying to be serious with 3 BARS//
Hes a RETARD , I eat "NERDS" , but I'll make an exception to THIS "SWEET TART"!//

I need to STAKE THIS FAKE , hes a MISTAKE ITS FATE//
The only way he would ever "Blow up" , is if he KEPT EATING CAKE!//

I'm sorry your not FEELING GREAT , he couldn't come up with a FLOW if he was NEXT TO A WATER FOUNTAIN//
I heard you hurt your back its Jake Gyllenhaal (JG) , FROM BROKEBACK MOUNTAIN!//

bi**h I'll hit you so fast I'll make your head spin I'm A BLURR//
your bars aren't hot more like ROOM TEMPERATURE!//

I'm like Mezcal Tequila make you burn , with a touch I CAN MELT A CANDLE//
At best your apple cyder you ain't HARD TO HANDLE!//

And stop popping in my threads , YOU NEED TO QUIT FAM//
Last he told me I was sick , and he was MY #1 SIG FAN!//

BlackFang17
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Nomad

I changed the last couple of lines , but its all gravy , what do my peeps think?

DDX
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I'm on my crack pipe
Living on on the good life
It's everywhere I see strife
keepin my hand a penknife.

I want to see those unicorns,
prancing next to those hawthorns.
Never think from those blackthorns.
My life will be what forewarns.

Those unicorns so pink and light
They saved me from my mental blight.
They wake me in my lonely night.
Thinking bout my mortal fight.

My unicorns will die for me.
I don't want them die for free.
I just want you to see,
What they all will do calmly.

An exchange for one the love,
there is no need to shove.
They are watchin from down above.
I am the peace and they are the dove.

What I'm trying here to say
Nothing really that goes neigh
My unicorns are here to stay
In my mind and in the fray.

Parsat
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Blacksmith

Black-Fang: We know where your rhymes are, there's no need to put them in all caps. If anything that makes the rhythm too cut-and-dry.

BlackFang17
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Nomad

And you are who?

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

He's Parsat. Did you not read his username?

BlackFang17
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Nomad

That's not what I meant , I mean is he that special that he has to write something about me , also is he worth dropping some bars on.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

Hell yes. He was one of the kings of this thread earlier on. He has some skills.

DDX
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Nomad

well the old kings dead and gone,
now we have a new one, time to move on.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

I guess that's for him to decide
like a choice between suicide and homicide.

DDX
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Nomad

Homicides the way I lean,
better them than me, old bean.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

I guess I kind of maybe agree
but I'm possibly probably improbably sure for me,
that my clear indecisive decision would be
glorified, glamorous, glorified homicide. Possibly.

What to the Hell?

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