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StraightJaketMan
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Yes, I do know that this Idea has already been used in the Tavern, but I believe it would do good if this topic was in the Arts, Music, and WRITING section as of now.

Let's hear the Bard we all (hopefully) know that's inside you. He wants to escape, and through the Armor citizens, and their poetry, he can! I want to see your best poetry here (in the correct area) and I hope we do actually see that some people have a creative side to them, and not just something that's too corny (although those poems are acceptable)

NO SPAMMNG! I WILL FIND YOU IF YOU DO!!!

Have fun, citizens of Armor!

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kingryan
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Ah, excellent. We are starting poetry at school...

My Grandma's Biscuit Tin
(This is my homework....)


My Grandma's biscuit tin always sat on a shelf.
Filled with mystery.
Inside she kept her cherished memories,
clippings, photos, memories.
I would stare at it for hours on end.
Waiting, watching, hoping.
Maybe one day I would see inside.
Mystery, hoping, waiting.
My Grandma would never let me see in it.
Sadness, despair, Loss.

My grandma became sick and went to hospital.
Worry, pain, misery.
She died that same week.
Loss, greif, depression.
And so we had to sell her house.
Hollow, empty, anguish.
So I pulled down that biscuit tin.
Excitement, wonder, hope.
Inside were pictures.


Thats just a start...do you like it?

KingRyan

MafiaSlayer
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Peasant

it is now and I'm glad because i can share some of my creative writing and poems

kingryan
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A Love Poem
by KingRyan


She stood there in the morning sun,
her face blemish free.
Her hair moved gently in the breeze,
like calm ocean waves.

Her beauty shon out of her
Like the rays from the sun.
The roses held in my hand were ugly
Surpassed by her beauty.

She spoke my name,
yet I could not respond.
Fully entrapped by her loveliness
I could not move.

She walk towards me and help me,
in a deep embrace.
I felt the warmth of her body
Pressed close against mine.

And then she left, and walked away.
My heart still a buzz.
The roses still in my hand.
And my heart long gone.

By KingRyan

MafiaSlayer
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Peasant

AHHH!!!! I JUST DELETED MY SHORT STORY!! CRAP!! ok well I'll post it again later, argh this makes me SO mad

MafiaSlayer
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Peasant

Okay well I had a really cool story but I'm too lazy to re-write it. I will post it sometime though. I am working on a poem so I'll post it soon

MafiaSlayer
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Peasant

Ok I'm done, here it is. It's about my girlfriend

Lost in the Sea of her Beauty
By MafiaSlayer

And i will hold
your head above
the waves that hope
to swallow and
drag you down.

I see fear
in your eyes
yet they still shine
with passion of
an indescribable kind
like a blanket of stars
in a moonless sky
as the world
continues to hold us
against this endless horizon
in this lonely sea
you and i
knew for the first time
what it meant
to be together
and still remain alone

We could die like this
in each others arms alone
miles and miles far
from what we call our home
but this ending is beautiful
our hearts could beat as one
as we close our eyes
for the final time
goodbye faith
goodbye fear
nothing can never
take this from us.

kingryan
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Hehe!

A girl in my class Googles 'My Grandma's Biscuit Tin' to see if she could find one to copy. She handed in mine!

KingRyan

venus_vex
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A girl in my class Googles 'My Grandma's Biscuit Tin' to see if she could find one to copy. She handed in mine!


OMG really?? who was it?? your nemesis?
kingryan
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No, it wasn't me nemisis. [Just a girl whose rice I threw around....] She didn't actually hand it in though, just showed me.

If you are in my class at school...and want to leave a comment, click here to get to the main page then click the register link up in the right hand corner.

King....Ryan

kingryan
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A Broken Dream
By KingRyan (a.k.a Ryan H)

Dreams are things that are special.
True only to youself.
You aim for them and hope
That they may be true one day.

But sometimes no matter how hard you try,
these dreams end up with you sad.
Thrown at the ground and broken.
Into a thousand pieces like a smashed bottle.

Our lives feeling like a ruler.
Snapped in half down the middle.
Broken fragments flying out-
and hitting other people.

But luckily we cant stay this way,
Forever and a day.
We sometimes need to just let go.
Of our dreams that began long ago.

But letting go isn't that simple.
As our lives twist and turn.
The hurt is pushed into the back of our mind.
Where it becomes lost and forgotten.

Until one day when we rediscover it.
And it hits us like a car.
It knocks us senseless.
And brings back all of the hurt.

By KingRyan
[a.k.a Ryan H!}

the_wallys1
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hey this is wally i should have copyed ur poem for my thing cause my is pretty bad.
LOL

kingryan
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Very Funny Wally. (Everyone else - He is in my class!)

Don't copy it!

KingRyan

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