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Posted Jun 27, '08 at 8:01pm

StraightJaketMan

StraightJaketMan

407 posts

Yes, I do know that this Idea has already been used in the Tavern, but I believe it would do good if this topic was in the Arts, Music, and WRITING section as of now.

Let's hear the Bard we all (hopefully) know that's inside you. He wants to escape, and through the Armor citizens, and their poetry, he can! I want to see your best poetry here (in the correct area) and I hope we do actually see that some people have a creative side to them, and not just something that's too corny (although those poems are acceptable)

NO SPAMMNG! I WILL FIND YOU IF YOU DO!!!

:D Have fun, citizens of Armor!

 

Posted Jun 27, '08 at 9:32pm

kingryan

kingryan

4,165 posts

Ah, excellent. We are starting poetry at school...

My Grandma's Biscuit Tin
(This is my homework....)

My Grandma's biscuit tin always sat on a shelf.
Filled with mystery.
Inside she kept her cherished memories,
clippings, photos, memories.
I would stare at it for hours on end.
Waiting, watching, hoping.
Maybe one day I would see inside.
Mystery, hoping, waiting.
My Grandma would never let me see in it.
Sadness, despair, Loss.

My grandma became sick and went to hospital.
Worry, pain, misery.
She died that same week.
Loss, greif, depression.
And so we had to sell her house.
Hollow, empty,  anguish.
So I pulled down that biscuit tin.
Excitement, wonder,  hope.
Inside were pictures.

Thats just a start...do you like it?

KingRyan

 

Posted Jun 28, '08 at 8:44pm

MafiaSlayer

MafiaSlayer

164 posts

it is now :D and I'm glad because i can share some of my creative writing and poems :D

 

Posted Jun 29, '08 at 7:13am

kingryan

kingryan

4,165 posts

A Love Poem
by KingRyan

She stood there in the morning sun,
her face blemish free.
Her hair moved gently in the breeze,
like calm ocean waves.

Her beauty shon out of her
Like the rays from the sun.
The roses held in my hand were ugly
Surpassed by her beauty.

She spoke my name,
yet I could not respond.
Fully entrapped by her loveliness
I could not move.

She walk towards me and help me,
in a deep embrace.
I felt the warmth of her body
Pressed close against mine.

And then she left, and walked away.
My heart still a buzz.
The roses still in my hand.
And my heart long gone.

By KingRyan

 

Posted Jun 29, '08 at 3:02pm

MafiaSlayer

MafiaSlayer

164 posts

AHHH!!!! I JUST DELETED MY SHORT STORY!! CRAP!! ok well I'll post it again later, argh this makes me SO mad

 

Posted Jun 29, '08 at 4:04pm

MafiaSlayer

MafiaSlayer

164 posts

Okay well I had a really cool story but I'm too lazy to re-write it. I will post it sometime though. I am working on a poem so I'll post it soon :D

 

Posted Jun 29, '08 at 11:41pm

MafiaSlayer

MafiaSlayer

164 posts

Ok I'm done, here it is. It's about my girlfriend :D

Lost in the Sea of her Beauty
By MafiaSlayer

And i will hold
your head above
the waves that hope
to swallow and
drag you down.

I see fear
in your eyes
yet they still shine
with passion of
an indescribable kind
like a blanket of stars
in a moonless sky
as the world
continues to hold us
against this endless horizon
in this lonely sea
you and i
knew for the first time
what it meant
to be together
and still remain alone

We could die like this
in each others arms alone
miles and miles far
from what we call our home
but this ending is beautiful
our hearts could beat as one
as we close our eyes
for the final time
goodbye faith
goodbye fear
nothing can never
take this from us.

 

Posted Jul 1, '08 at 2:52am

kingryan

kingryan

4,165 posts

Hehe!

A girl in my class Googles 'My Grandma's Biscuit Tin' to see if she could find one to copy. She handed in mine!

KingRyan

 

Posted Jul 1, '08 at 4:03am

venus_vex

venus_vex

4 posts

A girl in my class Googles 'My Grandma's Biscuit Tin' to see if she could find one to copy. She handed in mine!

OMG really?? who was it?? your nemesis?

 

Posted Jul 1, '08 at 5:12am

kingryan

kingryan

4,165 posts

No, it wasn't me nemisis. [Just a girl whose rice I threw around....] She didn't actually hand it in though, just showed me.

If you are in my class at school...and want to leave a comment, click here to get to the main page then click  the register link up in the right hand corner.

King....Ryan

 
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