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The Way of Continuation

Posted Nov 26, '13 at 11:09am

Snag618

Snag618

768 posts

YAY!!!!!!!!!! (To stop this from being spam, I put this here)

 

Posted Nov 26, '13 at 2:53pm

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,227 posts

I'm doing a bad thing. Aminu distracted me last night.

I promise it will be up today. If it isn't, I allow Sal to take my Season 2 writing privileges and the ability to do whatever he wants with my character, no matter how embarrassing or if it were to kill me off.

[Note: I still count the morning of tomorrow as "today" given I will still be up and whatnot, but if I get a chance for actually today then I will take the chance]

 

Posted Nov 27, '13 at 2:58am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,227 posts

Alright...I made you all wait long enough.
Well..not really. But whatever.

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Chapter 1
     Part 10: The milk that graces my throat

     pang closed the book.

     "What are you doing? Why did you stop reading?" his one foot lover inquired, looking towards him with large kawaii eyes.
     "I'm a bit thirsty and have a hankering for a snack. Plus, we've been reading for like..what?...5 hours straight?" pang responded, placing Sal, and all of his 18 inches on the ground, then walking towards the kitchen.

     As pang opened the mahogany door that normally guards his room, he couldn't help but catch a glimpse of his sweet Sal, staring at him with a look of heavy pondering in his eyes. "pang, doesn't this seem more like a cop-out? Y'know, to avoid doing the next section?"
     "Whoa whoa whoa now hold the goshdarn phone for one minute. Breaking the 4th wall is MY THING, and happens in my thread, not this one. Bad Sal! Bad!"
     "...anyways. But really, why not just do the next section? I mean, it wouldn't be that hard. You could get your food and drinks after the chapter ends"
   
     The two were walking into the hallway at this point. pang casually strolling along while Sal scurried his 4 foot body along.

     "To be honest, this break is necessary. I don't want to rush the story too much, y'know? Timing is a great way for suspense!"
     "Yeah...but the story is going well. Why break the pace?" By now the two had reached the kitchen, and pang was opening the door to their fridge. The door, which was handcrafted by Scandinavian Mountain-men out of pure Mahogany, also had etchings of the Sal and pang snuggling.
     "Let me ask you a question, why do people get upset when a series/story/etc. takes longer than expected? I mean, I get it the artist had given a schedule, then the person would be upset because they were lied to, possibly inadvertently, or maybe feel obligation for receiving said item because of the promise...but what of moments when there is no promise?" pang began to ponder, pouring himself some milk/
     "What are you talking about?" the hunk at 1 meter asked, confused as to why his sweet began such thoughts.
     "Like...say a story is being made, and keeps at a pace that seems to be a schedule, but no schedule is promised. Then, the next update takes some time. Why do people get upset? Is is because we get so trapped in a ritual that disturbing it upsets us?"
     "Have you been hanging out with Moe a lot again?"
     "No!" pang slammed the milk on the counter, turning around with a striking glare. "Because I don't drink."
     "pang I'm over here."

     In a moment of burning and reckage, pang had acted like he was speaking to a camera, only confusing 4inch Sal more than he already was from pang's random thoughts.

     "I'm sorry, just a little caught in the moment. What's say you and I go back and...'tell our own story', and then we will get back to WoC?" pang winked.

     Before pang could even finish the sentence, Sal was in the room preparing himself, with some smooth Kenny G playing.

 

Posted Nov 29, '13 at 9:52pm

Snag618

Snag618

768 posts

As it seems no one else has, let me be the first to thank you posting this in time.

mahogany door

You have no idea how funny this is, trust me.

Breaking the 4th wall is MY THING, and happens in my thread, not this one

Yes, that does seem to be your thing.

4inch Sal

It seems sal is changing height a lot.

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 7:48am

GandalftheGrey666

GandalftheGrey666

1,786 posts

4inch Sal

18 inches

1 meter

Pang seems to be doing this on purpose...

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 9:18am

Snag618

Snag618

768 posts

Pang

I hope that was a typo, otherwise you are in a lot of trouble

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 3:09pm

GandalftheGrey666

GandalftheGrey666

1,786 posts

I hope that was a typo, otherwise you are in a lot of trouble

Pfft, I said "Pang" before a lot of times and didn't get in trouble, right Pang?

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 5:12pm

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,227 posts

Gandalf remember that part about how I'm one of the writers of this story?

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 5:36pm

GandalftheGrey666

GandalftheGrey666

1,786 posts

Gandalf remember that part about how I'm one of the writers of this story?

I do remember. I also remember that I'm not in the story anymore, so it doesn't matter.

 

Posted Nov 30, '13 at 5:55pm

R2D21999

R2D21999

8,090 posts

I do remember. I also remember that I'm not in the story anymore, so it doesn't matter.

They could bring you back and make your character do something totally embarrassing.

 
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