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School Poetry Gallery - By KingRyan

Posted Oct 12, '08 at 9:33pm

Danstanta

Danstanta

1,402 posts

Iron - King

It's , it's beautiful :[ :')

 

Posted Oct 13, '08 at 2:40am

kingryan

kingryan

1,618 posts

Gold - Duke

You are being serious right?

KingRyan

 

Posted Oct 18, '08 at 5:09am

shermzx

shermzx

571 posts

Wood - Lord

haha klaushouse,now i know why i don't wanna know what goes on in your mind!

 

Posted Oct 20, '08 at 4:27am

shermzx

shermzx

571 posts

Wood - Lord

king ryan,
i like your poems,but i think i like those that describes how you feel when you are heartbroken best.

 

Posted Oct 20, '08 at 5:19am

Strop

Strop

4,021 posts

Iron - Prince

Moderator

Hey guys, sorry, but I was asked to take the poem down, apparently it will be reposted later? Ask Kingryan :D

 

Posted Oct 20, '08 at 5:31am

kingryan

kingryan

1,618 posts

Gold - Duke

Yep, thats right....

It had to be removed........

KingRyan

 

Posted Oct 20, '08 at 4:12pm

crazynaitor

crazynaitor

2,554 posts

Iron - King

These are some of the bets poems I have heard Ryan they are great.

 

Posted Nov 15, '08 at 6:16am

kingryan

kingryan

1,618 posts

Gold - Duke

Well...I'll put that poem up again...

Well...I was sitting infront of my computer...and I just felt the urge to write something...since I am reasonably good at poetry (from feedback i've got) I decided to write a poem.

DISCLAIMER: This is not directed towards anyone, because to that person (you know who you are) I promised I wouldn't write you a poem...

This is just me expressing my feelings, and is in no way directed at anyone, except myself.
Well...time to write...

Well here I am,
And the world is still spinning.
I am out of options,
And am far from grinning.

I don't know what to do,
I don't know how.
I don't care what happens,
To me right about now.

A mutilated heart,
Strangled inside me.
Old wounds never healed,
Will never let me be.

Each time a new blow,
Smashes my heart.
The wounds of old,
Are torn apart.

The girl that I loved,
Dumping me for my friend.
Always being rejected,
My pain has no end.

But I am not dumb,
for life must not stop.
And by writing these things,
I can re-climb to the top.

Eventually this will turn out well,
And things will be fine.
But until that day I must press on,
And make the world mine.

Well? What do you think? Made up on the spot...

I hope you like it!

KingRyan

Thought I would go the whole hog and post the whole post!

KingRyan

 

Posted Nov 15, '08 at 6:18am

Sodas

Sodas

266 posts

Gold - Knight

Thats a good poem KingRyan I really liked it.

 
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