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ubertuna
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I have been noticing a lot of poetry on the site recently, and I thought it would be nice to have a friendly little poetry competition. There will be a weekly theme, and the entries will be judged by one of the moderators or administrators. This week's theme will be "Water." The deadline is Saturday, August 2nd. The winner will be awarded 25 Armor Points.

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crimsonblade55
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Alright I'll give a stab at this one.Haiku's are pretty easy for me.

I Call it:Armor Games

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I am an active member
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I hope you like it.

crimsonblade55
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I just realized that Armor is two syllables so I will edit that last haiku.

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I am an active member
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necromancer
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Edit:
Falling Autumn

Maple Leaf
tongue of dragon's flame
chastises drab leaves below
lexicon of life.

Falling Down
wind blows, knocks leaf off
tree; twir-ils, tumbles, tossed by
breeze; litters forest.

White Blanket
Falling blissfully
Stinging like nettles burning
Freezing Earth; Winter

shayneii
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The Forest Night

Moonlight, dark and soft,
Evergreens swaying, wind blowing,
The wolf comes to rest.

infernacron
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Nomad

Autumn

sports are in the air,
I run exceedingly at school,
I have a big crush!

infernacron
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Nomad

autumn tree

autumn tree in blue
i see you everyday outside
as you grow i grow

infernacron
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Nomad

crisp breeze

the breeze carries me,
I fly with the crisp breeze in peace,
I am one with wind

infernacron
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Nomad

Luno

Luno the white star,
glows when i sleep and when I'm tired,
Luno,always calm

infernacron
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Luno

Luno the white star,
glows when i sleep and when I'm tired,
Luno the moon

crimsonblade55
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couldn't you have posted all of those haiku's in a single post?

firetail_madness
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Shout your fear!
Shed your might, in a tear.
For a grand pear.

Estel
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Firetail, you have to follow the rules for a Haiku.
First line is 5 syllables, 2nd has 7 and 3rd has 5.

crimsonblade55
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yeah firetail your needs some more syllables

first line has 3
your second line has 6
and your third line has 4

it needs to follow the rules.

infernacron
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Lily

Lily I love you
I wish we can get married
you are beautiful

infernacron
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know this had nothing to do with fall but i just want to say it!
Revolution

I fight for the light
beside me no one but me
as i face certain death

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